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Review of chapter "After school" from Netchka
Review:
Interesting story start. Can't wait to read more. Quite a few people seem to have retained memories and physical changes from Ethan's Halloween spell.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [3 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "After school" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Could be ugly, very fast...or could be good.
Comments from author:
How so?
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day after" from djhardim
Review:
You might want to add some authors notes: It took a bit of digging to discover that Adam Jenkins came from the video game Deus Ex: Human Revolution.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deus_Ex:_Human_Revolution

So, am I correct that Xander is now a cyborg? If so, how noticeable are the prosthetics?
Comments from author:
Sorry about that

Yes why else would both Larry and Cordelia react to him
Review By [djhardim] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "After school" from Bobboky
Review:
Cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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