Review of chapter "After school" from
tchizekReview:
Could be ugly, very fast...or could be good.
Comments from author:
How so?
Review By [
tchizek] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day after" from
djhardimReview:
You might want to add some authors notes: It took a bit of digging to discover that Adam Jenkins came from the video game Deus Ex: Human Revolution.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deus_Ex:_Human_RevolutionSo, am I correct that Xander is now a cyborg? If so, how noticeable are the prosthetics?
Comments from author:
Sorry about that
Yes why else would both Larry and Cordelia react to him
Review By [
djhardim] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "After school" from
BobbokyReview:
Cool
Review By [
Bobboky] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated