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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SpacedCadet

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"the only member that hadn’t taken the scared oaths, "

sacred ?

Comments from author:

Yes sacred...as in holy?

You meant "sacred", you wrote "scared"...as in frightened.

Comments from author:

Oh wow. Ill fix that ASAP. Thanks :)

Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [12 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SpacedCadet

Review:

"the only member that hadn’t taken the scared oaths, "

sacred ?

Comments from author:

Yes sacred...as in holy?

Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [12 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from banditdoz

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fantastic cant wait for the next chapter ;D

Comments from author:

Thanks :)

Review By [banditdoz] • Date [12 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid

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This was lovely. Now they could wait for her to come back, seeing as they're interested in the mystery of how the town could be saved.

Comments from author:

Thanks!

Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CageFire

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Interesting new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)

Comments from author:

Thanks :)

Review By [CageFire] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Genuka

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pity they haven't caught up yet. more please!

Comments from author:

It will be awhile before they catch up *insert evil laughter*

Review By [Genuka] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze

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Points H, O, and W..

As in "Doctor? Doctor Who..?" "Exactly", to say nothing of "How in the heck do you get into these situations?"

Comments from author:

Exactly.

Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PATM

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I like it and the post Amy Rory story line is very cool.

Comments from author:

Thanks!

Its actually not post Amy and Rory, only because I like them too much. They might still end that way but this is set after the last Christmas special but before season seven.

LovelyLucy

Review By [PATM] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka

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Evil cliffy! Must have more!!!!

Comments from author:

Mwahaha! More is currently under construction.

Review By [Genuka] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Runewolf

Review:

I like this, it's a good start.

Dawn's chronology works, though I don't totally understand why she doesn't remember.

Comments from author:

Thanks. Dawn's memory is going to be something that is slowly going to be revealed.

I appreciate the review,
LovelyLucy

Review By [Runewolf] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid

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Pretty good. Pretty interesting.

EDIT: Yeah, what you did that was very unexpected was have Dawn land on the ground in the same universe that she started in - even if her regeneration broke the spell.

Comments from author:

Thanks!

EDIT: I felt that Dawn, the kid sister of the Slayer, didn't really wanna go and her magic, the Key, knew it. Therefore, when she jumped, her magic closed the portal for her, thus causing the Princess to land in Dawn's familial world. This will be explained and get very confusing for the Princess.

Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Not Rated