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Review of chapter "Explanations" from purrfus
Review:
Interesting. Eve as an immortal would go a long way towards explaining her parent's issues. It is kind of bumpy though - it may be just a bit too many ideas / changes in what is a very small space.
Comments from author:
oh, I know, but these were two FFA ficlets that fit together- I might expand them a little later, but was trying to stretch my writing wings, as it were, and In Death is a fave series of mine.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [28 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Explanations" from Thedruid
Review:
Eaaah. I have to give this a low rating. Almost every 3 paragraphs your rewriting backstory cannon for your convience. This story really needs to start with Willow becoming a vamp, or Faith becoming immortal. Not years later, with the charcters we know drastcally changed with no story.

Also, a 'problem' appers in the story, and is almost immdeatly solved. Not good for a story.
Comments from author:
Okay, first off, I SPECIFICALLY posted this as an A/U ficlet- not a story and nowhere did I say it was going to be canon. I posted both of these ficlets together as they connected together and that I wanted to show more fic for people to read in the In Death subcategory...that being said, I might expand this 'verse at a later date, but, as the author's note states, these were merely written as FFA entries, 85% of which are generally ficlets that try to push a lot of information into a little bit of space. I'm sorry if you were unfamiliar with that concept.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Rating [2 out of 10]
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