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Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work. Sorry for the later review (internship)
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from (Current Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Yup, Yup! Definitely a story to watch! Lots of fun for everyone!
Comments from author:
Thank you nerfherder! =D
Review By [(Current Donor)nerfherder] • Date [13 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from SamDragon
Review:
I don't think he quite hit that safe reality he was trying for. :)
Comments from author:
;) yeah it wouldn't be easy for Xander over at Supernatural verse
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [6 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from Zyanadryn
Review:
Fantastic update!
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from burn
Review:
I love this story! Separate realities is the way to go IMHO. Verse melding rarely works and more often than not, sucks.

I would caution you on being too ambitious. You've got the makings of a pretty epic story here. You might want to pick a plot with a beginning, middle and end within the setup that you've already done. Something manageable. Well...like TV episodes really. Otherwise, you might write yourself into a corner later and get frustrated or get hit with the dreaded neverendingstoryitis.

Anyhoo, Thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks burn for the review and advice! Yeah I am doing some planning right now, hopefully I can one day end this story.
Review By [burn] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from JimmX
Review:
Simon on Serenity, not Sam.
Comments from author:
Thanks JimmX, I've made the changes :)
Review By [JimmX] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from eriktheviking
Review:
An intriguing and entertaining story, well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review =D
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from jhor
Review:
so glad you have decided to continue this series I enjoy it please carry on.
Comments from author:
Thank you ;)
Review By [jhor] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from KingHawke
Review:
supernatural? that I did not see coming. the introduction of super mystery woman in the phatasm was creative. I wonder who she is, from your mind or another show. can't wait to see how it turns out for everyone.
Comments from author:
mystery woman is based on one of the special characters in Disgaea, the PS2/PSP game :") Thanks for your review!
Review By [KingHawke] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from DarthPayne
Review:
I'd have thought that Xander would be looking for Star Trek/Star Wars realms, and perhaps Halo...
Comments from author:
I have plans for him to find Star Trek and maybe Halo one day... but let's see how things goes first ;) I don't dare to make promises now when I have so little time to actually spend on writing.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. It's been a while since you last updated, so it took me a few minutes to recognize this story. I hope to see more soon. :) I have to admit I never really watched supernatural so I hope they don't spend too much time there, as I'll probably be lost the whole time. But I guess whatever you have planned will be good. I just hope the next chapter isn't too far away. :) I guess I should have figured that there might be some drawback to/problem with his power. I'm also looking forward to seeing what other universes they visit.
Comments from author:
Thank you CageFire! The Supernatural verse will begin with its Season One Episode Three, so don't worry about not knowing the verse, I'll be including necessary backstory on the multi-verse characters. As for how long they spend there ;) let's see how thanks goes first. And thanks for the review!
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from CastorandPollux
Review:
Excellent.
Comments from author:
Thank you! =D
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review Bobboky :)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Nice work. Built up the uber power angle and then bait and switch... Xander is reduced in power, we see that there are other dangers with powers greater than him (so far) and others like him to train and oppose him. Great story, building well. Look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you Studyofchaos :) I am hoping for more of a character buildup in this story, instead of going uber power bashing plot.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from Selias
Review:
Interesting. Good to see that Xander has some competition.
Comments from author:
Yeah :) I am trying something different with the plot in this story. Xander's powers are unique, but there are better than him out there.
Review By [Selias] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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