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Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from nemogbr
Review:
Looking forward to reading more.

This would present a number of different scenarios. The mind boggles.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [11 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from (Current Donor)NekoHibiki
Review:
This is good!^_^

Really great fanfic!^_^

I like it!^_^

^_^

^_^
Review By [(Current Donor)NekoHibiki] • Date [23 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Be interesting to see where you go from here. Great fun to read, really open to abuse. Nice to see you are putting controls on it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from samsas
Review:
I have always love the concept of a reality jumping Xander and the situation it would cause for him and the different realities. You really have me wondering what is going to happen to Serenity. Looking forward to your next update.
Review By [samsas] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from Toras
Review:
I do like this story. I've also enjoyed all of your other stories as well, so I was predisposed to like this one, but I have to say very nicely done. Should be interesting to see how the Supernatural folks react to what Xander can do. Especially if he step out of their reality and then back in to guide them to kicking the demons ass.

I do have one question, will you be updating your other stories anytime soon?
Review By [Toras] • Date [20 Oct 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from Calison
Review:
This is pretty awesome Keep on keeping on man
Review By [Calison] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: X-man power?" from Calison
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His power is the kaleidoscope AKA the Second true magic AKA The Operation of Parallel Worlds from the Nasuverse MAN if Zelretch finds out about this who knows what will happen?
Review By [Calison] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from branz
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a reality way out of left field to go to would be
the Gundam Seed Verse During the Armory 1 Attack.

maybe they join up with the 3 Ship Alliance.
Or they trade FTL tech for working Mobile Suits and Gundams.

Or to the Supreme Commander Verse During the Carpet bombing of Earth.

Or during the Hiver attack of earths first ship in the opening of Sword of the Stars.
Review By [branz] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from (Current Donor)NekoHibiki
Review:
I think this story is veeery good^_^

I like it!^_^

I don't know if you're taking suggestions but, how about one of those realities that Xander jumps to be Equestria, yay ponies!^_^
Review By [(Current Donor)NekoHibiki] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from Bill
Review:
So very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work. Sorry for the later review (internship)
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Yup, Yup! Definitely a story to watch! Lots of fun for everyone!
Comments from author:
Thank you nerfherder! =D
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [13 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from SamDragon
Review:
I don't think he quite hit that safe reality he was trying for. :)
Comments from author:
;) yeah it wouldn't be easy for Xander over at Supernatural verse
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [6 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from Zyanadryn
Review:
Fantastic update!
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: Trapped!" from burn
Review:
I love this story! Separate realities is the way to go IMHO. Verse melding rarely works and more often than not, sucks.

I would caution you on being too ambitious. You've got the makings of a pretty epic story here. You might want to pick a plot with a beginning, middle and end within the setup that you've already done. Something manageable. Well...like TV episodes really. Otherwise, you might write yourself into a corner later and get frustrated or get hit with the dreaded neverendingstoryitis.

Anyhoo, Thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks burn for the review and advice! Yeah I am doing some planning right now, hopefully I can one day end this story.
Review By [burn] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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