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No Sucker Punch; Rather, A Hyena’s Bite

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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Genuka
Review:
... it needs more but its an interesting story so far. I'm not familiar with the source material.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [21 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from shakeval
Review:
cool, little on the small side, but at least we have the setup for a dilemma that xander needs to resolve and fast. . . . but how will it be resolved, will it be resolved, i'm waiting with baited breath. . . . kind fishy and nasty but interesting
Review By [shakeval] • Date [22 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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Reminds me of Rifts and mega damage creature rules.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bobboky
Review:
very cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from shakeval
Review:
so wait, is there like some dimensional fusion going on here, Babydoll and friends cross over through various dimensions that are blending into hers, releasing large amounts of mana into the surrounding area, causing the foursome to back off of Xander as they bask in the upsurge of high mana fields pulsing outwards, empowering xander and allowing him to break out and cause panic and pandemonium, chaos thine name is xander . . . wonder what would happen if he invoked the name of Janus and brought down attention upon himself in a world without gods?
Review By [shakeval] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Past Donor)betascud
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Yes, well, waiting for the Dojo fight or something... Otherwise I guess that Xander will replace the bus-driver "oh, and one other thing"...
Review By [(Past Donor)betascud] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gladius
Review:
Very cool: it's always fun when Xander's posessions work together to give him a hand ... now I want to know what they saw through the binoculars ... is he seeing the way Babydoll is being treated? Or maybe just any of the girls? Garunteed to get his blood up either way ...
Review By [Gladius] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [13 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Interesting set up.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Valandar
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Wouldn't the Sucker Punch world be a high mana world, too? There's at least one supernatural entity in the topmost level of the framework story, one there's no way Baby Doll could have known about - the bus driver, aka the Archangel. Also, her plan was never really her plan - it always seemd to be directly inspired in her for the sake of (oops, any more would be spoilers)
Comments from author:
Given how confusing the film is (fantasies within fantasies? -- that's really pushing it), it's entirely possible for it to be in fact completely prosiac among Babydoll's traumas. Or if you like, with all the dimensions out there, Xander could genuinely be in a low mana world in this differing version of the original film. Anyway, that's my story, and I'm sticking to it. Thanks for the thoughtful review!
Review By [Valandar] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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