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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GaboonViper
Review:
Your Dexter is very well done. You give him just the right kind of dry, detached humor that I love in the Jeff Lindsay's book series, especially towards the end of the chapter. Given that dexter is not an easy character to write, which is an understatement, I can't stress enough that this is quite an accomplishment.

The other characters felt a little off to me though. In particular Deborah who seemed too hostile to Dexter for, as far as I can tell, no apparent reason. I missed the sibling bond there. Then again, she hasn't had much screen-time yet, so perhaps it's unfair of me to judge so quickly, but I thought I'd mention it anyway.

The story itself is quite interesting, I can't wait to see where you're going with this. Good Dexter/BTVS crossover are sparse, not to mention difficult to create, but I have high hopes for this one.

Cheers,
Boyd
Review By [GaboonViper] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oxnate
Review:
Not nearly enough Dexter crossovers. I'm a fan of the show, but never read the books. Still, your explanations were enough so I knew what was happening.

Ok, first thing I realized... it took him a year to kill him? Shame on you Dexter.

But excellent start. I look forward to more.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dmitri
Review:
This looks promising. I approve!
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
You write an excellent Dexter. I can't wait for Dex and Faith to meet.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Great work. You have captured Dexter very well. I like how it didn't all go his own way and that is what will propel him into contact with Faith. I am kinda glad that guy chose "Fast" though. I don't share Dexter's taste in reading material.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cardona
Review:
An intriguing start.
This story makes me want to get the original material (Dexter) for a better understanding... but your style allows me to enjoy without knowing it.

just one thing, as Spanish-speaking person, "anciano jubilado" it sounds very strange... (I can not say, because of my ignorance of the source material if that person speaks Spanish really terrible - or just atrocious), in my honest opinion, it sounds better: "viejos jubilados" (is the 'correct' plural, and ancianos-elders is very formal)

Buen trabajo... and I hope to read more soon.
(good work... y espero leer mas pronto.)

Werner M. (Mr. Cardona)
Comments from author:
Clearly, I don't speak Spanish, but Sargent Batista does, so I was trying to find some common phrase Batista might say to get everyone moving and would be, perhaps, mildly insulting. My attempt at finding the correct words failed, so I will change it to your suggestion.
Review By [Cardona] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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