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Review of chapter "Sit On My Face" from LostDragon
Review:
Any chance of an update anytime soon?
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [17 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sit On My Face" from OlBear
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Just found this story and enjoyed it immensely. Hoping that you update soon.
Review By [OlBear] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sit On My Face" from AngelQueen
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Wow!! You've done an amazing job on this story, taking the Slayer myths and puting a completely new spin on them. I mean, it's practically canon that 97% of the Watchers were lying bastards, so the idea that they stole the Slayers from their rightful place isn't much of a stretch, but you've created an amazing alternate mythology. It's brilliant!

I especially love the way you've written the characters. Everyone is still very much themselves. And hey, Angel's on his way out of town, so one less headache for everyone involved. Excellent. ;)

So now there are two Slayers, though given what Kendra just endured, is it quite possible that it was enough to activate Faith? If so, I don't think it'll be long before she decides to take a road trip to join her sisters in Sunnydale. Should be... interesting, to say the least. We all know things can get weird when Faith and Buffy are put into the same room. Who knows how things will go with Faith and Kendra. *bg*

Again, outstanding story! Thank you so much for sharing! :)
Review By [AngelQueen] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sit On My Face" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sit On My Face" from Traveler
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Good story, please continue. Thank you for sharing.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [13 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sit On My Face" from CrystalBlaze
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In at least one story, Kendra Young is Trinidadian.. and tends to point it out to avoid confusion..

One does wonder how Willow's going to get a clue about being the Guenhyfar, but I suspect Morgana's going to have to fill her in, since her sepulcher is under Sunnydale.

~~Afterthought~~

I agree about wandering accent.

Being raised by Sam Zabuto probably didn't help much, to be honest.

(I personally was born and had the first twelve years of my life in Illinois, then seven years in Georgia and a smattering of time in Cali before settling in Virginia--where I was confused for a native as my accent had settled into the same mold as native Virginians by sheer chance!)
Comments from author:
About Kendra's accent, while it's true that it's atrociously bad, it also reminds me of all those actresses and actors who use their *real* accents in voice-over work or movies...and get accused of being bad at their own accents. Yvonne Strahovski, Corinne Kempa, and so on. In truth, you really can't win when it comes to accents in media.

Me, I explain it away with the fact that no matter how deep your original accent, it will wander and be corrupted if you move around a lot (this is actually true in real life). Which Slayers usually do (Buffy was kind of unusual in being posted on a single active Hellmouth).
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [12 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sit On My Face" from wonderbee
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Nice section, and glad to see Xander able to get through to Kendra enough that she didn't just try and kill him after that first shot. Now, will look forward to seeing if she is going to survive Dru or not, and what it might mean for everything if she does, as that might mean Faith might not live to see Xander this time out, or if something else will go down with them all.
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sit On My Face" from draconis
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REALLY like the multiple world-wide mythos you've developed. It's easy to suspend disbelief...that you're sharing actual legends and myth instead of stuff you just imagine. Also liked the twist you gave regarding demons were NOT the first to exist...just the first ones to dominate (history is (re)written by the victors, after all).

I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when Zabuto shows up (I AM assuming there will be one or more confrontations of various types...perhaps Zabuto spiritual/moral and/or with Council wetworks teams). Despite her lifelong indoc by Watchers, in your story I can see Kendra eventually seeing the truth of things as her 'taint' is removed by Xander and she experiences better/purer Slayer abilities, dreams, etc...especially if Zabuto lies to her and she detects it in his heart rate, etc. And of course, Faith should be a kick.
Review By [draconis] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sit On My Face" from Bobboky
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Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sit On My Face" from lordamnesia
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Ok, WOW, this story is so very awesome! It takes the Slayer story and turns it to the left slightly, and makes a ton of sense! Good God Almightly, you have a winner here! Keep up the AMAZING work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "British Invasion" from VillageOrchid
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I like the idea of mythic variations and of course the projection is that Xander is the light Knight. Nice done with a little POV of Giles, Xander and Buffy so far.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sit On My Face" from semkirk
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Nicely done! Glad to see an update. More soon I hope.
Review By [semkirk] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sit On My Face" from RockyWilliams
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Good chapter. Glad to see the story updated. When I saw it flagged as new, I couldn't remember at first what the story was about, but a few lines in and everything came back. Hope to see more when you get it written!
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Hate Everything About You" from mendenbar
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Glad to hear you won't give up on this. It is totally fascinating and pretty unique. Is Angel, will Angel, be the Dagda or lover that the Woman goes to each year that brings back the rains?
Comments from author:
Angel? No. He's the wrong gender.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [20 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Hate Everything About You" from Lurkerabove
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This story is right up my alley. I love variations on the Slayer origin mythos; there are a lot in the fanfiction, and this one seems to be really interesting. I hope you feel better soon, and take good care of yourself. If you continue this fic, you'll have at least one fanatical reader!

-P
Review By [Lurkerabove] • Date [2 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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