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Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from (Current Donor)NekoHibiki
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"What in the Stargate universe is even a threat to Dahak? Nothing that I can think of."

Use the Ori.
Review By [(Current Donor)NekoHibiki] • Date [22 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from Delkatar
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That was fun :D
Review By [Delkatar] • Date [17 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from KrisB
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I was just re-reading my favorite ship of the line stories. I love this one, but am sad that it's a one shot. I'd love for you to use this a start for a full fic. Hell, even if you just made the IoM conquer the Goauld over a long time span, you'd have a fun fic.

Some one commented that they could see this turning in the Warhammer series very easily. I see it as well. In the Star Gate verse we pretty much only see the Goauld and a handful of other space capable races. The replicators could easily turn into the necrons (though they were supposed to have been around a lot longer than that.) The Orks and other races could easily be fighting away from the gate system where the Goauld just don't go. Hell, the Goauld migh know that they can't infest the Orks and any planet with Orks on it is nearly impossible to get rid of them. The Goauld might just lift the gates from those worlds and make sure that the orks don't spread. Hell, that may actually be where the bulk of the actual Goauld fleets are. ;) Earth ain't really important to them. Even if that've some how turned their moon into a battle fortress, it shouldn't be able to challenge them to their thinking.

I could easily see Xander just pretending to be a Goauld so that they won't bother with him and for hm to use the time to build up his empire. That might be where the whole god-emperor thing came from. He could say that he tried to stop it, but you know how little that actually works.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from banner
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That was fun from beginning to end.
Thank you.
Review By [banner] • Date [24 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from Difdi
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Replicators come to mind as a threat to Dahak. All it takes is a couple modules landing on the hull...
Review By [Difdi] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from Dragonwolftiger
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You said that nothing is a threat to Dahak? True the Goa'uld are fairly weak but in large numbers they are like the Achul'atanni? sorry not sure if that name is right. But combine the replicators, the Goa'uld, the need to protect earth, the Asgard, and the free Jaffa whom could with training be a enlisted (of their own free will) army, then you have the Wraith and the Ori whom only the Asgard tech could defeat. Yeah if you think about it you have lots of enemies. Still a great fic and think about continuing, maybe instead of having Sam Carter explode a star with a stargate, they bring in a pair of Planetoids, the Dahak and a new one and wipe out Aphosis's fleet. Remember only the Alterran chair allowed them to defeat Anubis's 60+ ship fleet.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from Bobboky
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awesome work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from Malu
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Another perfect Jim Baen/David Weber crossover! And it does deserve a continuation. Yes, Dahak is (very) powerful, but even he (you, the writer, actually!) hinted at the fact that the Ancient Tech under the Ice-Cap could very well be more advanced, so there are possibilities!
Review By [Malu] • Date [15 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from TKBSeventeen
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Really? That's it? Come on! What I've read so far was beautifully written and you decide to leave with a cliffy? Damn it! I need more!
Review By [TKBSeventeen] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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There were at least three enemies of the SGC that would be problematic for Nergal. The Ori, the Replicators, and any other rogue ascendants. Until then, the hellmouth still needs policing. Also, moving the moon will have serious magic related consequences so it is probably gonna be stuck for the entire run of Buffy. The tech and enhancements should upgrade the Scoobs and SGC1 very nicely. It will take a decade to get everything ready on Nergal so lots of time to build up to the big battles. Have fun!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from SeniorFleetCaptain
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I have not read a Dhaka SG-1 cross before

thank you for doing one now for a antagonist you have a few options

1 make the snake have a empire that is more realistic after been in control of the milky way for over a 100,000 years

2 there is Wraith they destroyed the alterans after all

3 the Ori are the last i can think of
Review By [SeniorFleetCaptain] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from Toraneko
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The End?!?!?! why!!! *pouts* you crossed with one of my favorite series of sci-fi books, and you only wrote one chapter... more? please? pretty please, with a cherry on top?
Review By [Toraneko] • Date [19 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from AndreaMaine
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I bet every other ready went into this story thinking it was a Star Wars cross over.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from Genuka
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I so very much love this fic. I think that its become a classic.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's no moon....." from wolfshell
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I love these books. But remember, with Dahak you don't need a protagonist, having humanity simply crush all the evil overlords is justification enough for a continuance. I want a utu class planetoid for Christmas.
Review By [wolfshell] • Date [24 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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