Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Angelinasway
Review:
OMG! I knew it! Lol. No, but really, he might be hallucination the black eye thing. Who knows! Maybe he's poisoned by the djinn right now.
Hmm... All I know is that I feel so bad for Dean. He really is going nuts right now, and I can almost feel his stress and uncertainty.
I really can not wait to see what happens. This was an amazing chapter.
Hugs, Ang
Comments from author:
Gah! Thank you for the awesome review! And yes, Dean is definitely off his rock, no doubt about that. Thankfully in the next update, he'll get some answers. Thank you so much, hun! *hugs*
Review By [Angelinasway] • Date [30 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AbigaelRose
Review:
Come on B! You know you can't just pop back up on the radar, write a Fanfictastc chapter, and then leave a cliffie like that! great job on your latest hit because you are honestly the only writer that makes me feel bad for both Dean and Lisa and their ridiculas using of eachother throw in a little bit of Buffyesque soulmate-sepration and compinsation-angst and you have quite a story. I hope to hear more soonish! -Buffy
Comments from author:
Thanks, B! Hopefully soonish will be much sooner than these last few soonishes! Lol. I'm glad you are liking Lisa and Dean, I wanted to make them feel a lot but not enough, like in the show... if that made any sense whatsoever. :P Thanks for the wonderful feedback, as usual!! :D
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [26 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Ahh! What the fuck is going on? I swear to god it like she's souless Buffy! Okay so obviously she's not trying to get Sam out of hell because it doesn't seem like she even knew where Dean was. God I'm so confused. It's almost like she's evil. I need to know more!
My god your Dean characterization is so dead on. I just feel so bad for him right now, and I'm like she's right there dude, she's right there!
Great chapter hon and I can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
I can't give anything away! Aaahh! But your insights and feedback are, let me just say, freaking awesome. FREAKING AWESOME. Lol. More answers to come soon enough! I was just telling someone else I don't do a good job with "installment" chapters because I write with too much mystery... and I think I'm losing readers because of it. Lol. Blast!
Thank you, thank you for the feedback on Dean. That's amazing feedback and it really fuels my brain because it's been exceptionally hard to get out of his head while writing this so to hear that it's going so well mean so much.
Thank you! *hugs* Thank you for the great review.
And... to respond to your response to my review, I'm fascinated with Spike! And I love your explanation of where Buffy's head is right now, it makes total sense (let's just say I was writing a whole bunch of smut in my head while reading that for my smutlet thing and I was like, "But why is Buffy not reciprocating?!" Lol) and I can't wait to see something blossom between those two - for those two to help each other! As well as how Spike's presence will play out in the next chapter. Okay, I'm done. :P
Review By [Angelinasway] • Date [27 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Okay B great second chapter but stop teasing already! I love the fleshed out memmories/peices that you had mentioned in Pillars of Salt and how you sort of Dreamversed/ visionversed it into this new story. As always you have the coiling tension and the plot heat building, but you have to move the plot along soon or you are gonna end up with a story that bleeds togeather. I am so glad to see you back in the game!
Always a fan, Buff
Comments from author:
Oh my gosh, B... seriously, that is the epic feedback and advice because that is exactly what I'm going for since it's from Dean's POV. But worry not! It will come to a head in the next two chapters that will explain what's happening to poor Dean. As per usual, I fail at writing stories that stand alone-ish chapter-wise. I'm much more of a "novel" writer where you have to keep reading for things to make sense, lol. Thank you, thank you for the wonderful feedback, as per usual. I always get giddy when I see your reviews, you have such insight into the stories. Hopefully not such a long lull between chapters after this drought.
Thanks, B! :D
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [27 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wow! So I just read Pillar of Salt in one sitting and was so happy to see this story too! I love your style of writing! I really like how you've written the characters even though this world's Buffy is making me a little nervous lol You are an amazing writer and I cant wait to read more of this!! A +++++
Comments from author:
Wow! Thank you SO much! I'm so glad you are liking it and holy moly! Thank you for the recs!!! I'm so pleased that you like my writing style, sometimes I feel like I go a little bit overboard heehee. Thank you for the amazing feedback and I hope you continue to like the story and the 'verse!! :D
Review By [sarbear] • Date [27 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Excellent kick off to this section of your series! I just reread pillars of salt to jig my memory and i enjoyed it so much, reading it all in one go highlighted to me how much i enjoyed the pace of the story, It ended on such a cliff hanger i couldn't wait to read this new part and this first chapter didn't disappoint. You've got me wondering what's going on with buffy as she's just so dark. I adore the way you write dean. Your able to communicate the things that motivate him and torture him effortlessly. Im really looking forward to reading how this part of the journey plays out :-)
Comments from author:
Thank you SO much. I'm so pleased you are liking it so far and that you re-read Pillars of Salt! :P You reception is perfection but my goodness, the feedback for Dean is amazing, thank you. :D Especially in this instance when the guy doesn't know which way is up or down, so thank you for that! Thank you for the awesome feedback, I hope it continues to keep you intrigued. :)
Review By [raintree] • Date [15 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Just finished Pillars of Salt and immediately jumped into this story. I love it keep up the great work.
Comments from author:
Excellent - thank you so much! I'm so pleased you are liking the 'verse so far! Thank you for the awesome feedback and for taking the time to let me know! :D
Review By [stopwatch] • Date [13 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Great start hon! I feel so sorry for Dean right now. He's so devastated!
I'm so nervous about what's up with Buffy though, and the only thing I can think of is that when Zachariah removed the other worlds Buffy's souls he might have removed both soul's to make her even more uncaring. Or... oooh... Is she looking for Willow to get Sam back, though the torture bits pretty hardcore, even for this dimensions Buffy. I'm so very intrigued right now!!!! You just keep me guessing!!! Love it!!!
Ang
Comments from author:
Thank you! (As I already said, especially coming from you!) I know, I really wanted to nail down where Dean is coming from since this is a different variation of him from Season 6. And excellent, excellent inquiries about Buffy! I shan't give anything away but I'm so happy you're intrigued! Thank you for the awesome feedback! *hugs*
Review By [Angelinasway] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Hey B! Finally, the sequel is up! Once again you kick off with a stunning opening chapter and a fully rounded idea on how you want readers to see it. Welcome friggin back! -Buffy
Comments from author:
Oh thank you! Fabulous feedback, as per usual from you, B! Thank you thank you, I hope I can keep up the momentum! :D
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]