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Review of chapter "Commotion" from deathgeonous
Review:
Yeah, you go catch up on all the gossip. I swear, the Jedi Temple must be worse then a Old Folks rec home for gossip. Hehe, well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
What do you expect with so many people living in close quarters, with little else to do for relaxation... Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [11 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Commotion" from Vashti
Review:
I just finished reading this series & I really enjoyed. I wish you had done more of these vignettes, but I'm glad we have these.
Comments from author:
Thank you! And I hope you like the new vignettes!
Review By [Vashti] • Date [28 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Commotion" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
I'm enjoying this series. Super glad you decided to continue it! Hoping for more!

CT.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for your review! I'm working on a couple of stories right now, but I don't know when I'll have time to post one again (they still need a lot of improvement, I'm afraid...)
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Commotion" from cylonborg
Review:
i like the short ficlets you've done and would like to see more. why not combine them all into one story with multiple chapters?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! I'm working on a couple of other ficlets, so don't worry, I'm certainly not finished with this.

I'm working with ficlets because I'm horrible at finishing stuff. If I write a story, I'd have to have some kind of plan for it, with a beginning, a middle and an end. I don't, I'm just writing scenes that seem fun to write. This way, I hopefully won't disappoint anyone when I run out of inspiration...

Cally
Review By [cylonborg] • Date [24 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Commotion" from bradsan
Review:
oh can't wait for more. this is fun.
Mace will be so frustrated and he will be so proud when he sees Buffy fighting. She might not be as fast and strong as a Jedi but she is used fighting stronger evil and when mad she will become a force he won't recognize. He will be more confused when he sees her using her emotions and become stronger by it without going dark.

Hope you will write a scene where she sees somebody hurting him and you know Buffy never hurt anybody she cares about.
Comments from author:
Hi,

Glad you liked it, there is certainly more coming, I am working on 2 stories at the moment, and your review gave me ideas for a third, it'll just take a while to write it all down and get all the facts straight.

I think Buffy frustrates Mace because he doesn't understand her. He knows she isn't like any Jedi he's ever seen, but he doesn't really get what that means. But the more he gets to know her, the better they'll be as a team. I believe they can be great friends, because Mace isn't like other Jedi either, his lightsaber combat form, Vaapad, proves that. They just need to get used to each other.

Thanks for reviewing!

Cally
Review By [bradsan] • Date [15 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Commotion" from AndreaMaine
Review:
Liked this one, just wonder if you have more to come.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. I'm working on a next story, and have some ideas to write more, but we'll see (I try not to promise anything, I have a bad record...)

Thanks for the review!
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [12 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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