Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from dreameralways
Review:
Very interesting concept. Given how old Logan is it's also possible that he's actually her grandfather and for whatever reason the mutated gene simply didn't express in her mother (or father, if you wanted to go that way it may actually explain why her father was such a bastard. He actually hated himself). Anyway, look forward to more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Not Rated
So, I went into this...without an open mind. I thought, well, nevermind what I thought then. You have done an outstanding job surprising me insofar. I found the Dr. Strange section forced and like he was a caricature of himself, but not bad in any sense. The quartet of girls was great. And most of all. I find your explanation of how Tara's not dead and has Wolverine's powers amazing and the execution need perfect. Everything does feel a bit rushed. If you slowed the tempo down a little bit and let her easier moments breathe some more this story would be a 10 instead of a 9. Congratulations on surprising the hell out of me. --Drake.
Review By [DrakePendragon] • Date [3 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from lilyoftheval
Review:
Never thought of it, but I kinda like the idea of Tara being Wolverine's daughter.
Review By [lilyoftheval] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated
I liked her hitting Dr. Strange over the head with her notebook. He definitely needed that. Hm, any chance that the X-Men's Cerebro would ID her as a mutant & a contact team get sent ? With Tara's luck it'll turn out Sabretooth is her dad, not Wolverine.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [29 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Nice chapter, is this a rewrite of this chapter or something? I'm about 95 percent sure I've read it before. I am kinda looking forward to tara meeting logan.
Comments from author:
Sorry, I forgot to mention that this is a completely rewritten version of chapter I deleted. Next chapter will (Hopefully) come soon.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [29 Jan 13] • Not Rated
The idea is interesting - it's nice to see someone outside of the usual suspects as a Howlett, something I've done myself - but the execution is decidedly subpar. You really need a beta. And not just for little spelling and grammar quirks, either. This story needs a lot of help.
Comments from author:
Oh, I'm well aware I have a lot to learn. I just hope reviewers would point out what they think I did wrong. That would be helpful. I don't mean that every reviewer should act like a beta reader, it just would be nice to know what went wrong.
Review By [JoeHundredaire] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Although, you do realize that if Willow finds out about Tara's being alive, it would probably crush her even more emotionally and psychologically.
Which would be interesting to read (not that I take great joy in seeing characters suffer...much).
Comments from author:
I know... *grins evilly* ...after all, they've both connected to same Earth... which connects everything... (I do have idea about that, but I'm not sure if I use it)
I never liked much Willow, at first few seasons I didn't much care about her and later her selfishness and inability to think consequences of her actions annoyed me. In season 8 comics I started to loathe her. I haven't yet read season 9 comics so I don't know what happens to her in future.
Review By [TAO] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]