Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from katfairy
Review:
Okay, we get it, you hate Spike and Angel. Let it go already. Your stories are otherwise good, but the knee-jerk bashing got old very quickly. Here's a thought- if you hate them so much, just LEAVE THEM OUT. Send them to Kuala Lumpur or something. It's getting to the point where I almost dread starting a new story because I know you'll at the very least have a completely unnecessary snide comment about them, even if they have nothing to do with the rest of the story.
Comments from author:
Uh, Manchester is the one to have decided that Angel needed a painful and/or complex death for this story. I'm just the person who picked up the story and find the established wish of both necrophilia and pedophilia that Angel represents disturbing. Doesn't mean that they aren't good characters in a story character sort of way... Plus its fun to come up with complex punishments and situations. The more unusual with the least amount of actual prep the character has taken the better. Besides fan fiction is about indulging the what-if scenarios, you don't like how ours is flowing there are several Angel & Spike centric sections that show them in a more favorable light. This is the way we choose to interpret the mythos of the Buffy verse and how the situation might play out.
Review By [katfairy] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Love e idea that Janus is looking out for Joyce, and even has some interesting alternative ideas for bringing Dawn into being and kicking the crap out of errant hell-goddesses! :)
Comments from author:
Why thank you. :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [3 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Oh, the background stuff was interesting, but sort of like set up. I kept waiting for there to be some plot.
Comments from author:
Next chapter dear. We've got some of it mapped I just have to fill it in.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Jun 13] • Not Rated
About Loki: 'Puny god' Might want to introduce him to Dr. Banner.
Otherwise: far to short to count as a chapter.
Comments from author:
perhaps but after I'm done doing something I'm typing up the next chapter, for which Manchester provided a good chunk of material to help my muse along and its looking like I might have to split the silly thing up into 3 or 4 chapters once its filled out. Unless I skimp on the details but I don't really wanna do that. This one is more to tide you all over until I've got the other stuff typed up.
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from SpaceAnJL
Review:
Your Janus and my Eris would get on very well. The same enthusiasm for creating merry havoc with the timeline, and a certain fondness for tricksters and chaos magnets.
Comments from author:
Why thank you. I'm certain they would have loads of fun causing havok
Review By [SpaceAnJL] • Date [2 Jun 13] • Not Rated