Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from ChefJackButler
You have already had Xander acknowledge thet the is Android alpha. Have him be something other than a wolf.
Review By [ChefJackButler
] • Date [28 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from StoicLast
Good story. The question at the end, I don't know how you'd justify Xander turning into a wolf given the mythology. Vampire is doable I just don't think he'd do it without a really good reason (for all his practicality he identifies as human). Empowered human has me thinking of the fishman stuff from being a swimmer, so that's a definite maybe. However, my vote is for hyena shifter. The primal spirit (kinda like the Great Wolf Spirit?) has already chosen him. If about to face a situation that would kill him or those he considers 'his' would the Primal Hyena use the different energy in this reality to shift him? Consider also, perhaps he is already changing and doesn't realize it? Who is to say whether the Hynea precursors are the same as the wolfs or not? Maybe they are more mental/emotional?
Review By [StoicLast
] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from spikesplayfulpet
This is a great Story. I like how it is progressing and can't.wait To.see How it plays Out. I think xander should become a wolf. It might be easier for him since he was once possessed by a hyena. Just my thoughts.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet
] • Date [9 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from ajw
A very interesting story. Normally I don't particularly care for Twilight as the books are more or less a waste of paper and the movies are even worse. But this story has really caught my interest.
I really like what Xander is doing here. Especially how he's thinking like a soldier and using the various strengths and weaknesses of the supernaturals against them if the need arises. I especially like a) how he knocked some of the arrogance out of the werewolves by beating Jacob and b) how he's planning to take action against the Volturi.
On your options might I suggest option three. Xander becoming an enhanced human similar to a Slayer as it seems to me that the Twilight world needs something like that. Something that can put the fear of death back into the vampires especially and confront the self styled 'worlds most dangerous predators' with something that can and will kill them if they step out of line. Thanks to Willows magic if Xander gets bitten by a vampire or a werewolf it could result in him gaining their strengths and power, mixed with the residual essences of the Hyena and the Soldier to create the first Slayer their reality has seen. And of course when Xander does die the spirit created moves onto the next in his bloodline and so on into the future.
Review By [ajw
] • Date [5 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from BarefootXO
A great story all around
And Xander's still a champ
As to his fate, that's up to you
Just don't make him a vamp...
Review By [BarefootXO
] • Date [15 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from SnidelyWhiplash
It IS an interesting world. Great story. I always enjoy a military minded Xander reminding the bad guys why they have feared Humanity as a whole. As for strengthening Xander, any chance for a Were Hyena transformation akin to the Twilight Tribal Wolves? I remember reading one story that had Were Hyenas as the natural enemies of Vampires due to the whole "Eaters Of The Dead" thing they have going on. Having Xander as the start of a more Offensive Anti-Vampire shifting group rather then the Defensive Werewolves.
Review By [SnidelyWhiplash
] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from lillyb
Great work, I like the way your Xanders mind works. As for your question I go for option three And here is why, If he were a wolf the vamps would look down on him, If he were a vamp the wolves would see him as a traitor (aside from the fact sparklpiers are lame) but as an empowered human he could be an equal to both. Maybe with qualities of both like a hybrid he could be a sort of a bridge.
Review By [lillyb
] • Date [21 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from Bobboky
go with number 3... He is the Protector of Man. He is very human, don't make him into something he is not.
Review By [Bobboky
] • Date [21 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from KatieKat
I would vote to turn Xander into a vampire sans sparkles especially if it's a twilight type vamp he would still be Xander just improved. or maybe like a halfbreed we know how much xander loves his twinkies after all
Review By [KatieKat
] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from NamelessCritic
In response to your question, I would recommend him becoming an empowered human. Xander has too much bad blood between vampires to become one, and making him a werewolf would be kind of cheap powered for him
Review By [NamelessCritic
] • Date [15 Feb 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from Dyri
Empowered human would be best for him.
Review By [Dyri
] • Date [14 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from MasterDBlood
3-Xander becomes an empowered human
the others don't seem right
Review By [MasterDBlood
] • Date [13 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from Jiopaba
You know I just keep finding myself thinking "Xander steals a nuclear device and obliterates the home city of the Volturi." The collateral damage would be astounding though, and Xander's never really been an "End's Justify the Means" sort of guy. He's more the "If the world and an ideal conflict, the world must give way."
Review By [Jiopaba
] • Date [13 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from LiastraLee
Xander needs to stay human. His being simply human is what makes him great. Turning him into a wolf would take away from him, and making him a vampire would ruin him totally. Empowerment is ok I guess. I just prefer OG Xander.
Review By [LiastraLee
] • Date [12 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cry Havoc" from wjenks
3 any other way wouldn't flow right with your story so far at least to my eyes.
Review By [wjenks
] • Date [12 Feb 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]