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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story so far!

Tom.
Review By [(Current Donor)tchizek] • Date [16 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Netchka
Review:
Cool new chapter. Can't wait for the next ones to be posted. :)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [11 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Genuka
Review:
Evil? Yes, very evil.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from banditdoz
Review:
Hahahaha EVIL have some cookies and welcome to the dark side ;D Love it
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [10 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from moringstar
Review:
A nice chapter great build up and can't wait to see what your going to do to Wesley.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Glad you like it.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [9 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from WolfWriter
Review:
Well, Wesley is in for a rude shock, isn't he?

Looking forward to THAT little tidbit being chucked at him!
Comments from author:
Indeed. Wesley is going to get a shock when he finds out he's not going to be the Watcher to two Slayers only one - who herself will be far more inclined to listen to Giles or Xander than him.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [9 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Kindleflame
Review:
Are you still working on this? Please let me know. :D
Comments from author:
Yes I'm still working on this. Right now I am about two thirds of the way through writing the next chapter. Barring any unforseen difficulties it should be ready soon.
Review By [Kindleflame] • Date [6 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Ember
Review:
I always thought Xander would be a great whitelighter, great story
Comments from author:
Thanks.

I thought he would be a great whitelighter as well. I'm glad you like it.
Review By [Ember] • Date [5 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from locard
Review:
I think this story has a great start to it and I hope that you keep it going. I am a big fan of BTVS and of Charmed and I always look forward to stories dealing with them.
Review By [locard] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Genuka
Review:
A lot of people forget about the ripple effect. good call.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from banditdoz
Review:
Cant wait to find out how Xander discovers more of his powers and who knows because hes a guardian of 2 slayers as well he may have some different ones this is a Hellmouth after all ;D
Great Chapter thank you
Comments from author:
Indeed he might. Being a whitelighter assigned to Slayers as opposed to just witches he is allowed a bit more leeway in what he can do to help them by the Elders and it is known that both Whitelighters and Elders do have offensive electrokinetic powers - if I remember Leo used his offensively at least twice in the show - though they're generally not used. Whether Xander will be allowed to use his by his bosses I haven't decided yet.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Netchka
Review:
Can't wait for more chapters to come.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it.

I'll be starting on the next chapter soon.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Yay! Faith getting here own place! And orbing is sooo worth the nausea.
Comments from author:
Faith deserved her own place and it helps in making her feel less like an outsider and more like a real Scooby and thus much less likely to fall into darkness.

And I agree orbing is so worth the nausea you get initially. Faith and the others will soon come to understand that, though hopefully not to the point where they always want to travel 'Air Xander'.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RedCalypso
Review:
I'm really liking this story! I do think you need to work on your sentence structure a bit. You have a tendency to have run-on sentences.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

I am trying to address that issue as I know its one of my weakpoints but sometimes I cannot seem to avoid it.
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [RHatch] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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