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The Beginning Is The End...Pt.2

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Review of chapter "Goddess and Key" from Markelo
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For Xander's dad I would like to see Trick (Lost Girl)
Review By [Markelo] • Date [14 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Goddess and Key" from Zyanadryn
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For a possible father for Xander is after Freza died. Joyce went on a short holiday to forget her sadness and ended up in a small coastal town in Main called Storybrook. Where she met a local pawn broker and had a memorable evening with to sweep away her sad memories of her departed sister!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [10 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Goddess and Key" from Kiristeen
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Enjoying the story a lot. : ) I hope you're interested in constructive comments -- if not, ignore this next bit -- The story could use a bit more showing as opposed to telling, but other than that, I love your plot line.

You surprised me with Karr, I'd really thought it was kitt.

I if you still want 'votes' for Xander's father, I hereby place one vote for Snape. : )~

Looking forward to seeing more of this, regardless of who his father turns out to be.

Kiri
Review By [Kiristeen] • Date [7 Dec 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Goddess and Key" from (Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane
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Hahahahahaha so freaking awesome !!! \o/ so many feels ... So can't wait for the next installment, you always deliver such Epicness!
Review By [(Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [18 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Goddess and Key" from iamastory
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So funny cant wait for more! Is dawn really 15 shouldn't she be younger? When is xander and spike say thy r goin out or what? Is the storyline with the Mayor goin happen? Wen is xander dad commin to the story? I really hope that u update soon! Please and thank u!
:)
Review By [iamastory] • Date [16 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer's Test...pt.5" from submariner
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how about mike jenkins for xanders dad. the character is also known as the kildar from the books ghost, kildar etc by john ringo. he is an ex navy seal instructor who is very protective of women and is utterly without mercy to people / bad guys who harm his friends.
Review By [submariner] • Date [15 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Goddess and Key" from Eureka
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Only one thing to say....LMFAO!!!!!!!
So glad I didn't have any tea in my mouth when I read that one!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer's Test...pt.5" from DarkFaerieYumi
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I vote Loki or Tony Stark!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [9 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer's Test...pt.5" from iamastory
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john winchester from supernatural would be great daddy of Xander cuz then xander will have brothers and other demons and angelsgunning for her!!!! and is Ethan dead or something or r they all dreaming????! and wouldn't xander know that its the first evil or soemthing!!
Review By [iamastory] • Date [9 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer's Test...pt.5" from (Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane
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Awesome chappie ... Definitely jack for the dad,
Review By [(Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [8 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer's Test...pt.5" from BigredTheBallCrusher
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I have always enjoyed this story immensely, its a guilty pleasure as I don't normally like stories where Xander becomes female for what ever reason. That being said, as a price for him to pay, it works well. I'm glad you updated.
As for Xander's father, I would think that John Maclane would make a believable father. perhaps he tried a year in Sunnydale wile trying to patch things up with his wife post Die hard. Like wise, Martin Riggs could have spent some time in Sunnydale after his wife's death. Both have qualities that can be seen in Xander, and can be more than a little crazy at times, Jessica would no doubt have been worried about that sort of Crazy around her baby. Leroy Jethro Gibbs is another believable Father figure. On leave before he married his wife and not the easiest man to get along with. John Winchester or Bobby singer would also be good fathers for Xander, as they both exist in the fringe as Hunters, and engage in criminal activities as a result of their hunting life style.
All five men would make believable father's to Xander, without having to add too many universes into the mix. The supernatural fandom can be blended with Buffy easily, where ass the cops slip in easily as a part of the normal world. All of them have had trauma's and can be known for being if not out right crazy, over baring and not personable, which would make any woman think twice about the wisdom of allowing them around a newborn.
Anyway, thanks for writing and I hope that helps.
Big Red
Review By [BigredTheBallCrusher] • Date [8 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer's Test...pt.5" from VillageOrchid
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First evil. Complicated. While I read stories where Xander dresses as the Doctor on Halloween, not ones where he his the father. You hint at something semi-demonic or deliberately criminal, but not vampiric. So the idea would be to "make sense" without adding too many other crossovers. Ideally it would be someone from the Marvel Universe, since you implied it is out there. How about "Arcade"? I think he had some demonic help at various points (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Arcade_(Marvel_Comics) ). He could be related to the Wells family and have also grown up on the hellmouth.

EDIT: The full link doesn't come through - search "Marvel Arcade villain" to get result.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer's Test...pt.5" from antra
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I know it's a strange combination, but Bruce Banner - Marvel would be great. They could undertand the others struggles. And just the idea of the Hulk threatening Spike if he hurts Hulks daughter
Review By [antra] • Date [8 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer's Test...pt.5" from kyro
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go jack less crossover to manage and you already kind set it up with his clone and him giving her something to hide from the nid/trust is b in the end part 1 problem with Wolvie/Wayne/Loki/Luthor/stark is way to much of a extra universe to keep track of unless it's wolvie/stark/wayne from the resent movies i would stay away from the Doctor cause i don't see him like the violence involved with slaying but jack would be the best continuity wise but i cant think of anybody but maybe Alucard/Hellsing ultimate may explain Xans ruthless behavior when well truly pushed pass her breaking point plus we haven't seen Xan in full on Primal Demon Goddess mode like Alucard control art restriction seal release situation
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Alucard cool idea but way to much verse...he may show up later though.
Review By [kyro] • Date [8 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer's Test...pt.5" from chaosmancer
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i would suggest Capt. Jack from Doctor Who/ Torchwood
Review By [chaosmancer] • Date [8 Jul 13] • Not Rated
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