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Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
When are we getting an update? Huh? When?
Comments from author:
I know this is very late, but I had a grand idea and no overarching plot with the story. Happily as of this morning I have got the start of one so you can expect a new, better rewrite soon.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
More! I demand More!! It's been two months now!!! I WANT MORE!!!!

In other words, how is the update coming?
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [28 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The beginning" from hleach
Review:
will Xander fight every JL member he meets?very good so far.
Review By [hleach] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from HieiUchiha
Review:
Other than a few minor grammatical errors, this is an excellent story! I am a big fan of Marvel and Nova is one of those totally underrated heroes that doesn't get much limelight. In my opinion, The Nova Corps is probably the better paramilitary organization and much more respected galactic wide in the Marvel Universe, but let's face it, people respect The Lantern Corp much more. Still, if you do a side by side, the power set of the Novas is much more robust and WorldMind rocks, as it acts as a database/battle and communication network for the Novas.

I do wonder what part of the Green Lantern storyline you will be using, hopefully you will delve a bit in the power trip that the Oan's are currently going through in the comics. Hehe, it should be interesting to see what happens should Xander try to establish a Nova Corps and how the rest of the Universe will react to his actions. Oh yes, if you are taking suggestions on a pairing, perhaps Xander and either Powergirl or Galatea? I think my man Xander deserves a bit of hot kryptonian lovin', lol...especially considering the the forces that seem to be massing against, particularly when the Green Lanterns are going to say "Xander Bad!" and the rest of the "good guys" are going to automatically flock to the GL bandwagon with out actually thinking the rashness through. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what you come up with next for this story.
Review By [HieiUchiha] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from Morgomir
Review:
First, the best of luck with your health. Hope it will all be healed up soon.
Second, great chapter and keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from Bobboky
Review:
Very very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from brokenangel
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Why did Buffy attack Xander? I'm not sure i understood that.
Review By [brokenangel] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from CrazyCamera
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So glad you are back and ok! I will admit, I did not expect Xander to run into Star girl. Will she be back? It makes me think of what other super women he will run into! Loved the chat with Giles and the Buffy bit was icing on the cake! I do not remember if I asked if Faith would be a part of this story?
Review By [CrazyCamera] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from DrDamage
Review:
This is good fic.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job on the story, though I wish you would stop bashing the rest of the "BtVS" and "JL" characters.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from moringstar
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Can't wait to see what you do next and explain what xander caused with that spell.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from TAO
Review:
Okay...having watched Justice League Unlimited...I can say that John Stewart is a douche-bag and Xander let him off too easily.

Anyway, glad you're back. How are you doing?
Comments from author:
I'm now fine, back to the usual insanity that is my life and happy to b writing again. AS always thanks for the review and hopefully there will be more soon
Review By [TAO] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from thsunami
Review:
good to hear your better and a new chapter, I have become rather fond of this story
Review By [thsunami] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from Genuka
Review:
interesting update
Review By [Genuka] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Adjustment" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Poor Xander, if it weren't for bad luck he'd have no luck at all.... Looking forward to more and I hope your appendix has been beaten into submission.
Comments from author:
Not beaten, simply sliced. Finesse is everything
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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