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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Sigh, another abandoned child...
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Semnet
Review:
Great story. But i have to ask, Is this story abandoned? The last update was in February. I understand if life got in the way or if you have writers block. Just post to let the followers of your story know.
Review By [Semnet] • Date [1 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Stationary
Review:
i like the basic plot but i feel very strongly--and you're not first author ive come across who does this, whether out of preference or inexperience or opinion, whatever--that the dialogue between your characters need a slight revision. not their content, but their tone and language; i feel like it's a bit formal for a regular conversation.

i mean, most people, when they're talking to other people, don't bother NOT contracting (did i say that right?) their words. like, they say things like "don't, can't, won't, wasn't, i'm", you know? but you're all, like, "i am" or whatever. just a thought.
Review By [Stationary] • Date [29 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Netchka
Review:
Interesting story. Poor Xander, things just seem to happen to him don't they?
Review By [Netchka] • Date [29 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from foaminbones
Review:
Continue
Review By [foaminbones] • Date [24 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Markelo
Review:
I love this story.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
this is before the series right? before Will arrives? keep up the good work
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Very interesting, and I'm looking forward to more.

By the way, unless it is a different beverage that just sounds the same, it's "Tea", not "Tee"
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing and pointing out my mistake. I've already corrected it.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from RevDorothyL
Review:
So, Helen is assuming at this point that Xander was a normal human infant whom whose DNA Nikola tinkered with, eh? Which is more than enough reason for her to be ready to chew Tesla out, but falls far short of the degree of rage she's GOING to feel for my favorite Vampire Sanguinis when either she or Willow figure out the source of the other half of Xander's DNA. Can't wait!

(Much as I adore Nikola, in all his bad-boy glory, I love it even more when Helen rakes him over the coals for going TOO far over the line!)
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from purrfus
Review:
Intriguing.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from CageFire
Review:
Good to see a new chapter. Finally some answers showing up, I wonder when they'll find out the truth of who his parents are. Will helen do some sort of genetic test before or after nikola shows up?
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review. As for your question you'll have to wait and see.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from AllenPitt
Review:
Yep, it's always Nikola to blame for things like this. Can you imagine if he ever got together with Ethan Rayne? Willow and Xander are holding their cards close to their chests, Helen M. isn't revealing too much either. Which makes sense, I don't like the stories where everyone tells everyone everything on first meeting. They'd both be a lot more cautious than that.
So far Helen just thinks X. is another of N's 'experiments', doesn't yet realize the truth. That's going to be weird. At some point she's going to want to take a blood sample & run some tests. That's when the fun begins.
On the other hand, when Helen finds they're linked to the slayer & the council, that probably won't be good. Helen probably thinks of the slayer as a maniacal killer of Abnormals...
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Nuphar
Review:
I just wanted to say Thanks for following through I know how hard it can be to keep writing and the fact you are taking your time and making the whole story very smooth and realistic. I really am liking this story so far so . This is me saying Thanks and I can't wait for more.
Review By [Nuphar] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from CageFire
Review:
Nice chapter. One step closer. I'll be looking forward to the meeting. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Oooh. Good coaching Giles! Good scenes and narrative too. Thanks for continuing!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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