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Review of chapter "Awkward" from normanK
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Excellent update. Like how you are showing all the different points of view.
Review By [normanK] • Date [22 Dec 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awkward" from rtdsnine
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I like it but do have some faults with the Scoobies. To me they're coming off as a bunch of self righteous 'we're the only law around here and everyone is evil but us' especially Willow and Buffy. I find them kind of annoying. I like Xander and his caution of not taking sides before learning everything.
Review By [rtdsnine] • Date [20 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awkward" from dreameralways
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This is awesome. I was laughing so hard in so many spots. LOVE IT. I look forward to more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [16 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awkward" from ChaosLady
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Excellent update! Please, update more often, I haven't heard from you for awhile.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [16 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awkward" from Riniko
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Enjoying this story very much, Willow seemed a bit too naive at the beginning and too overboard on the memory obliviation, not that Obliviate is a good thing, she just pushed the issue a bit too far. And she does have her own history on using mind magic against others, perhaps that is the problem here. Now, the island where they stuck all their criminals with Dementor regardless of their crime that's bad, support Buffy here on killing all those creatures.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [15 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awkward" from Alkeni
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A good fic overall. I eagerly await more. ^^
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [15 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awkward" from burmafrdnow
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poorly done. Sad but not surprising. Very few can write a crossover that is fair to both universes. In this case you clearly take the side of HP. Which is kind of bad since it is very clear that overall the HP world is so prejudiced, corrupt and frankly in many ways stupid you have to dumb down BTVS to try and even things out.


Obliviation should be a capital crime. Its not. You ignore that.

Muggles are treated worse then Blacks before the Civil War. You ignore that as well.

There is nothing in the Wizarding world that is NOT corrupt. You miss that also

Prejudice is everywhere and once again you miss that.

How anyone can try and justify that is beyond me.

And I will no longer read this story
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [15 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conflict" from Alkeni
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Willow, you kind of crossed a line there. When people start killing themselves because you have a problem with the way they protect their existence from nonmagical people, you've crossed a line.

Good fic so far. ^^
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [15 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awkward" from AllenPitt
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yep. No government can tolerate a loss of sovereignty without a fight. The slayers take the position that they have a mandate to go after supernatural evil wherever they find it. Laudable, but no gov. is going to accept that the Council can 'go after' any of their citizens without permission.
Perfect setup for an eventual war of some kind. Voldemort is being very smart. At some point the Council will go after him, and the Ministry will see it as an attack on them, too.
Being the 'good guys' isn't enough here. The slayers are of course extremely powerful. They can be any one wizard or witch. Any dozen.... but if it gets into larger numbers, every witch/wizard is capable of doing all sorts of things. It'd be army against army.
Imagine if Voldemort starts reaching out to various vampire / demon organizations. Order of Taraka... Wolfram & Hart.....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awkward" from (Current Donor)Starfox
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Hm. Mixed Feelings there. I hate to see Hermione stuck in supporting an obviously corrupt system that scorns her and consdiers her parents almost animals. It feels so OOC for someone who was going against the same system in support of elf rights. I'd have pegged her as a champion of normal people, not a ministry lackey. I know there's the trope of her worshipping authority - but she broke all rules since year one if she thought they got in the way of doing the right thing. And she had personal experience with just how wrong and evil dementors are. I would prefer it if more muggleborn were scorning the ministry alliance.
Review By [(Current Donor)Starfox] • Date [15 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awkward" from ShalaDakiri
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I need to reread this, since I think I missed a few chapters.

Anyway, the Ender's Game reference at the end had me smiling. I imagine copies of the book will be found and passed out to those students who haven't had the pleasure of reading it?
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [15 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Killing Things" from normanK
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Great story idea. Thanks for sharing
Review By [normanK] • Date [11 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Killing Things" from Lolaisawesome
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Wow. Your story conveys the saying there are two sides to every story very nicely. The slayers are the good guys but they won't watch out for wizardkinds interests. The ministry is bad and Voldemort's worse but they all have there uses.
Is Voldemort's strength going to wear off, kinda like a vampire who drained a slayer?
Are the Scoobies going to realize that with his soul still on Earth Voldemort can resurrect himself?

Fantastic, well written, and well thought out story.
Review By [Lolaisawesome] • Date [31 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Killing Things" from Morgomir
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Great chapters. Sorry for the late review. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Killing Things" from ChikaraKatherine
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Ok, everything went about like I thought it should or would. But the one little exception, is the fact Buffy didn't take what was left of Voldies body. Nor Willow deciding to check to see where his soul went. They know he's not average demonly thing. So I find it a little hard to except that they won't be more in depth with distorying him. But at least when he shows up again, they will know what he is. A litch. Something Andrew would know all about. Still they did kill the dementors, and grabbed some of the thugs.

So they can work on them, perhaps get a little info out of them. Harry is still the wild card in this. As Albus seems to be trying to send him on the kill the items with the soul pieces. Because now Voldie is going to try and stay out of the Slayers way. But all things considered that shouldn't last long. As we all know Vamipires brag like teenage boys after sex. This whole set of wars however does give Harry a much needed. Smoke screan of shorts as no ones paying any attention to him. That means he can go and end the soul pieces. With little to no interfearance. As Tommy doesn't feel it when they go boom.

Still I feel like Buffy and Willow were writen a bit slopy as it comes to Tom. Granted they have a lot on there minds, and don't know about his stats as a Litch. Still using Buffy's blood couldn't be good long term. Buffy is a prime being of exterem power and will power. She's also female which is what the slayer has always been. Because males go insane from the power and act like random ragging monsters. Which Voldie could end up doing as well.

Over all I'm not compleatly sure how this all plays out. Nor how I feel about it. As I consider Buffy very intelagant, even if she hides it. Willow also seemed to have wised up a bit more since season seven too. Again I don't know how I feel about this. But I'll really want Willow to bring in Paton to crush the frack out of the wand users. That or a few other well known Generals who knew how to get the job done. Teach Tom to use Litch ablities. Really he's just a cheap rip off of a Litch and not nearly as powerful as one.

Wipe out all the morons with Paton, Sherman and who ever else they need. (FYI I really hate the wand users in Harry Potter's UK. They are so damned stupid and racist, its enough to make you wonder how they continue to breath.) Still if things don't end with Paton or Sherman laying a smack down on the Wizards. I'll be most unhappy.
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Not Rated
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