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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from raxadian
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Oh, but it must happen, or you just need to make everyone believe it happened?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [26 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Four" from raxadian
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You can use the line "Centuries too young to kill the Doctor" if you want.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [26 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from WebSpyder
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As many times as people insisted that the Watcher's Council sent Post, Buffy never once used her future knowledge to tell them that they didn't. Why? I get your point as far as Post trying to convince Giles not to check up on her, but Buffy knows that she isn't even a watcher anymore by the time she shows up in Sunnydale but she never bothers to tell anyone. Granted you still could have had them ignore her since they all think she's rogue but she didn't even try.
Comments from author:
Uh... I claim Author's Stupidity on that one.

(Good point. Should have thought of that.)

Hope you liked the rest of the story!
Review By [WebSpyder] • Date [24 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from sciphy
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i just love this series, and i hope that you never loose whatever it is that makes you write so well. Mainly because i think that i would have little enjoyment in the world without your stories. So thank you for being you!
Comments from author:
Aw, thank you! With the recent craziness with my job and the hotel, it's amazingly nice to get feedback like this. I would also like to thank readers like you, though. Your comments have helped me improve my writing tenfold!
Review By [sciphy] • Date [14 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Four" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Two" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Impulse control... Don't suppose the First Evil will accidentally order the turok-Han to eat the First Evil? Pronouns are weird...

Oh, so the guardian in charge of the axis got the psychic messages from post-resurrection Buffy, besides the one the doctor received but mistook for an earlier version of Buffy? I wonder if the guardian of the doomed timelines received them because they were the divergent focal points that doomed them...

Heh, an artificially looped timeline does explain the cave societies with the proper people living there... Cool.

Hope to see some of those background segments in the epilogue. Can't tell yet if the Doctor's plan on realizing he's an alternate and needs to keep quarantine is different because of 'real' Buffy or if he's employing the same trick he always does...
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Two" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Two" from MarcusSLazarus
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Why do I have a sudden feeling that the First just did exactly what whatever 'good' parts of the Doctor were left wanted it to do?
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty One" from Letomo
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That answered questions?

Well, okay, a few. But it gave more than it answered, I think.

Can't wait for more!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty One" from Gideon
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Ouch, my brain hurts :( I am not used to thinking so much, especially not when reading fanfic. It is probably good for me though, like eating my greens or something.
I thought I had worked it out a couple of times during the story, what was going on and who everyone really was, but I was always wrong. Now, though, I'm sure I have got it right. Now that you have revealed the tricky tiny bit of time lord history that makes it all make sense. At first I thought that guy was the Doctor, then I thought it was Dawn, now I think it was Rose - or what was left after Rose took the timevortex into herself.
It sounds like you have left the Doctor with a bit of a conundrum though - the only way I can think of for him to prevent Toby reading his mind and escaping from the axis is to kill himself. I hope he can think of something better.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty One" from CageFire
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Hmm, great chapter. I'm not really sure who this guy is still. The bad wolf maybe? That's the only guess I could come up with. I'm not really sure about any of the rest of that stuff, that predates the new series, and I never saw the old one.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty One" from Mcspender
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If there's something like the First Evil, something that came out of the primordial Chaos and whose main ambition is to turn everything back to Chaos, therefore there's must be something complementary, something whose main job is to balance the ecuation.
And of course, he whispers, he's that tiny little voice that makes you think before acting.
He does not scream, he whispers.
A Yang for a Yin.
I think we just saw him right ;)?.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from Gideon
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Damn. I thought Buffy might be a little bit more hopeful than was really called for, considering the general "end of the world" thing you have going on. But I didn't think that The Doctor would want to kill Buffy. Couldn't he have just done that anywhere, anytime? Why wait until she has willingly come to him?
Comments from author:
Yes. Interesting, isn't it? Almost as though he has something else up his sleeve...
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Eight" from Cutiepie
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Man, you REALLY love to mess with us, don't you. And we all keep coming back for more! I'm kinda sorta starting to understand things here . . . I think. And I like it, a lot. Keep those updates a-posting! Please and thank you.

EDIT: Nope, I was wrong. I'm not getting it all, yet. You just keep throwing more curve balls out and I realize after each one that I am still fairly clueless. Still loving it though!
Comments from author:
Thanks! Don't worry, I haven't finished explaining what's going on, yet, but you're getting nearer and nearer the actual explanation.

Actually, come to think of it, I think it's in the next chapter. Or most of it.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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