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On Slayers, Watchers & Hellhounds in Santa Barbara

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Review of chapter "Part Two" from Geyer
Review:
Good premise. I was fond of Kate on Angel, so it was great to see her here. Henry is a great character, too; he gives the story quite a different tone than using Shawn and Gus would have provided. And, as a former resident of Santa Barbara, I can assure you that you're right--it's a nice place to live, although very expensive, but not as much fun as the Psych version. I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop the next story with Tucker.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing.

I'm sort of in idle with this series going forward. I've been working on original fiction. When the well runs dry, I'll come back to fanfic, I'm sure.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two" from mariposa
Review:
Great story. I love Psych and think you were pretty true to characters in both universes. I'm not up to date with your series, but I've enjoyed the ones I've read.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I wish I could've included more of Shawn and Gus, but they are so perfectly written on the show that it's almost impossible for me to even conceive a way to fanfic them.

Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [mariposa] • Date [29 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two" from tealruby
Review:
Another nice story, and always fun to see a Psych crossover. Pity there was no way to hook in Marlowe though (not sure time-wise if this took place before or after Lassie met her?).
Comments from author:
This actually takes place, time-wise, before Lassie met Marlowe -- I was very particular about the timeline. He met her in the spring of 2011, in "This Episode Sucks".

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [tealruby] • Date [29 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Two" from ShyBob
Review:
Good story, clear dialogue, and really solid (uncluttered) action scenes. I enjoyed your OC, as well (assuming Janna isn't one of the comic book characters).
Comments from author:
Janna is not from the comics. I made her up out of whole cloth. I thought about using an existing slayer, or someone from the rest of my "On" series (like Amber or Dawn D.), but I actually wrote this story before about half of the other short "On" stories, so I hadn't fully fleshed those characters out yet. If I went back to do it again, I'd probably use Dawn D. because I want to develop her more.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [29 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part One" from PATM
Review:
I like Lockley, she isn't used enough. I wondered why she didn't replace those killed in the succeeding contacts with Wells? It left Henry in a position of extreme vulnerability, he didn't actually need to be there. Lockley should have known that.
Comments from author:
I honestly didn't think it through quite that far. Maybe they didn't have time?

Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [PATM] • Date [27 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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