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Review of chapter "part four: pull" from Pelouxaalens
Review:
Lovely story -but too short, I could have read and thoroughly enjoyed another hundred chapters of it.lol
Review By [Pelouxaalens] • Date [28 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part four: pull" from slmncpm
Review:
this is a fantastic story! i so wish there was more of it, but i know you are hurting to badly to do more or respond. MUAH thank you for this!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part four: pull" from loretta
Review:
this is great! please write more! i want to know the reactions to sirius being alive and finding out that hermione is pregnant with his child
Review By [loretta] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part four: pull" from Cateagle
Review:
Ohh, a very different approach to dealing with Sirius' being beyond the veil and in bringing him back. It's going to be most interesting to see where matters go from here and how he and Harry take Hermione effectively having his child. Methinks the child is going to be doted on like you wouldn't believe. Mind you, I suspect Harry will ask for Hermione's hand (if Sirius doesn't) and work hard at planting his own child there after this one is born. I wouldn't be surprised to see it be a trio marriage with all three of them happily together, or possibly a four-way marriage if Sirius would be open to it. Definitely all sorts of possibilities for sequels here.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part four: pull" from HarmMarie
Review:
Liked this.
Comments from author:
Thank ya, HarmMarie. I am cerianly glad ya did. :)
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part four: pull" from VillageOrchid
Review:
The spell ends but the story needs expanding or more in its "continuity". Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
I am excited about expanding it after I am done with all of my Wishlist and Yuletide fics. I surprised myself with this one and really want to poke at all of the different character interactions this opens up.

Thanks again for taking the time to review. :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part three: reliant" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I wasn't expecting you to establish a trio relationship out of this, but you do so very nicely. While the female to female erotic it chapter 2 didn't really make me steamy, I could tell it was erotica and was nicely written. I imagine it might have done something for the readers of this story that like to be with women.
Comments from author:
I always love odd relationships and although this situation had the opportunity for loads of angst and heartache I'm more fond of comfort. So, I'm glad the trio I landed on worked alright for you.

As for the second chapter, I rather felt fertility magic would have to be sexual and as I wrote it I was trying less for erotica and more for a magical ceremony/casting with notes of that. I certinaly don't mind if it's seen as erotica - I just almost feel that people might be let down if that is what you are looking for in it.

Thanks so much for reviewing, VillageOrchid.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part four: pull" from Almond
Review:
This gave me shivers. Very well written. Kudos!
Comments from author:
That is what I was going for - especially with my various magical ceremonies - so I'm glad it worked! Thanks for your kind words, Almond.
Review By [Almond] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part four: pull" from kaleecat
Review:
It would be really interesting to see what happens next. But I do love the final image. Very interesting concept and well done.
Comments from author:
*curtsies* Thank ya, kindly. The concept got stuck in my head when I got the prompt (even though it was only tangentialy related to it) and wouldn't leave. As for what happens next, I will probably do a sequel once Wishlist and Yuletide are ove.

Thanks again for taking the time to review, kaleecat.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part four: pull" from WolfWriter
Review:
You have GOT to write a review for this!!!!

This was fantastic!!! No, let me amend that; FANTASTIC!!!

There, that's better.

I can just imagine how Sirius is going to react when he finds out what they've done, just to bring him back across. After he finishes bawling his head off that is.
Comments from author:
*giggles* I assume you mean sequel instead of review - and I do have one starting to role in my head because the oddness of the group interactions set up by the situation in this is utterly intruging to me (Sirius being a main one in that, of course).

Also, thank you so very much for your kind words and taking the time to review.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "part four: pull" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Brilliant! Nicely done, indeed.
Comments from author:
He he he! Thanks for reviewing here as well, Sulien.

(or if this is just a massive coincidence and you somehow share the name of sulien on LJ then a hearty "thank you" for the first time. *laughs*)
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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