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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! This had to be one of the greatest setups for a Buffy fanfic I've ever read. I have no idea of where your story is going, but I am loving these first parts. But I bet Xander's head would explode if it turns out Cordy, Faith or both are also his siblings.

I just realized what a nightmare your story actually is. What if all the girls you were most attracted to turned out to be your sisters. EEEEEEEEEEEEE! I need mind bleach. Lots and lots of mind bleach.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from KrisB
Review:
Let's see Willow's crushed on Xander. Xander crushed on Buffy. Buffy was in denial about Xander since Willow had dibs.

I actually like the idea that the NID got the DNA shortly after the joining spell and only Buffy was actually fathered by him. The other two just seem far too out there.

I think that Jack should accept the demon/vamp thing rather quickly. Daniel likely has heard of the Watcher's council. I'd love to see where you take this.
Review By [KrisB] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Starfox
Review:
Very interesting story. I wonder when SG-1 will find out about Vampires. Quite teh Revelation for Buffy, Xander and Willow - and quite squicky too, with the non-sibling Feelings of the past.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from superbrutal
Review:
Excellent you updated.

LOL, some very funny parts. The Scoobies are probably much better off pretending that certain things never happened.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from sprig
Review:
*bursts into a fit of laughter* oh this is just gonna get better and better!! thank you for your hard work!
Review By [sprig] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from batzulger
Review:
Just a question. Why do you use stand out punctuation for thoughts and mental communication? Not critical, it just seems odd to me.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
Reread it again.
Hope you'll update soon because I can't wait what will be next.

good start anyway.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. ;-)

Trying to get the next chapter finished, but it's not working out quite the way I want. Characters don't always cooperate and do what I want them to do. ;-(
Review By [bradsan] • Date [17 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Netchka
Review:
Just read again. Can't wait for more chapters to be posted. :-)
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.

I just started working on the next chapter, so I hope it won't be too long until it's ready to go.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from loretta
Review:
this is a good story so far, i cant wait to see what will happen next
Comments from author:
Trying to get the next part done, and waiting on direction from my muse as to how to proceed. ;-)
Review By [loretta] • Date [12 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AndreaMaine
Review:
This is an interesting tale. I wonder if we will soon see just how Jack became dad to the three of them.
Comments from author:
Yes, that's going to be an interesting explanation. ;-)
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [19 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Can't wait to see how Jack is going to explain things! :)
Comments from author:
Yeah, that's definitely going to be interesting. ;-)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Review:
Good start
Hoping for more of this and I also hope that there is more Joyce too
Thanks
Comments from author:
Not to worry - Joyce *will* be making her presence, and opinions, known. ;-)
Review By [LFW] • Date [8 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
Great story so far. I love the 'family business' take and how the Slayer primal bound them together. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks. More in the near future.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [7 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
Almost forgot something very important.

"Therefore, she was the one who was going to have to ensure that SG-1 wasn't taken unawares by whatever was responsible for their current presence in this, ostensibly, backwater town, which was at least two hours away from civilization in the form of the nearest Starbucks."

I don't know about 1999, but there's a Starbucks an hour's drive away from Sunnydale in Oxnard, and I'm pretty sure that there's one in Santa Barbara.
Comments from author:
There are actually six Starbucks in Santa Barbara presently.

And I was having Carter exaggerate, at least in her head, Sunnydale's remoteness and therefore its relative unimportance for the sake of the story.

Daniels would be the one who actually focuses on being able to get what he would consider *good* coffee. ;-)
Review By [djhardim] • Date [6 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
So Jack thinks it could be Loki spreading his DNA around and maybe he only fathered Buffy, while your story summary seems to indicate that he may have only fathered one of them and the magic spell joining them to defeat Adam made their DNA similar?
Comments from author:
No, Jack doesn't necessarily think Loki is responsible for the kids. He's still trying to adjust to the idea that he has children he didn't even have a hint might exist.

And that's an interesting idea concerning the joining spell. We'll have to see what's revealed in upcoming chapters.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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