Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from brightnshiney
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Loving this story so far. I love the Buffy/Harry Potter crossover idea. Can't wait to see what you have in store.
Review By [brightnshiney] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from JulietteHeart
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Oh wow! All I can say is that I am in love with your story. And cannot wait to see what happens next. James is going to be irate when he finds out that Harry is missing!!
Review By [JulietteHeart] • Date [16 May 13] • Not Rated
Yes. Sirus is free and the truth is out. Young Harry is a future condutor of all things musical. Sweet. Plots great. Was also nice to see the lady at the magical enforcement office. Understand just how badly things got messed up. Barty got his and then some which will explode in a storm of scandle. Not counting the very nasty scandle waiting for evil Dumbledore. Oh its going to get nasty..... FYI nice to see Alice having made it out sane. Nevile now has his mom. Enstead of cranky grandmother, who's more than a little over baring. Perhaps Remus and Alice can hook up.....would be cute. Also liked the refrance about Willow, the pencils and impailing. That was good, very good. Reminds me of when Willow penciled that vampire. Over all just a very fun read.
Nice story so far... you going to continue? It's already been over a month and coming up on two... and you managed 12 chapters within the first two months after the original post. Not saying it should be finished, or that there should be 12 more chapters, just saying that there hasn't been any updates in nearly two months, and it seems not just to this story, but all in progress stories you've posted.
Review By [WCSII] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
I'm not a big huge reviewer because I tend to read so many stories so the plot has to really stick out for me to want to review and I have to say that I have really enjoyed reading what you have so far. Very well thought out plot with just enough tidbits here and there to keep me interested, I really can't wait to see how the rest of this comes together. Update soon!! I'm so ready to read more :D
Have I told you lately, HOW BLOODY BRILLIANT THIS FIC IS! First off, I had a very hard time keeping still during the James/Remus conversation, You planned that didn't you drawing that conversation out so long so that I would be bouncing up and down in my chair like a freaking idiot waiting for Christmas to get here, lol.
Second, oh my God I cried so damn hard when they freed Sirius. I'm still mopping up the river of tears.:) Hats of to you and this absolutely riveting fic. Please update soon. This is know in my top five HP/Buffy crossovers.
P.S Thank you for showing me how to do the dream sequence in italics. It took awhile for my addle brain to figure it out though, lol.
Review By [christytrekkie] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Hurrah! Sirius is out, excellent, was wondering how long he was going to hang in there for. Really enjoying this story so far, can't wait for Dumbledore to get an earful once James finds out Harry is not with the Dursley's! Thanks for writing & eagerly awaiting your next update =]
It's official, i'm truly on my way to being addicted to fan fiction. And it's your fault (grinning stuidly here). Thank you and keep the updates coming!
Review By [cecile] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from BelleMorte
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Okay this was, THE BEST CHAPTER YET of a truely great story.
I am well spoilt for choice at what part was best, i adore the depth you put into Buffy thinking about how getting Harry has changed her for the better, love the idea that he's brought such new hope to her.
AND at last James is on the move and got Sirius out, love his reactions.
But if i have to pick a favorite part, well it was just so da*m cute the whole Buffy and Harry in the park with the ducks and than the whole bubbles, adore his accidental magic with Buffy as well as her reaction to it, love reading this whole maternal Buffy it's well perfect.
Thank you for another great chapter, you made my week and as always made me jump with joy at seeing the chapter alert.
Not sure what i am looking forward to more, James turning up at the Dursley's and finding out how bad they are and that harry is not there, or when Buffy and James finally meet (though i have a feeling that's not going to be soon) and seeing how their first meeting goes.
Anyway till next time, thank you.
Review By [BelleMorte] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]