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Review of chapter "Fifty" from Tjack
Review:
Is this the place to start a whole big thing about health insurance?
Comments from author:
Not really. The challenge was to show the Scoobies deal with current problems. Not interested in magic and mayhem, I chose this. You try something else if you want.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [10 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fifty" from ianquest
Review:
You may want to keep in mind that not all your readers are American. I have absolutely no idea what you mean when you refer to 'PPACA', or what the requirements of 'Obamacare-qualified' health insurance are.
Comments from author:
Yes, you're right. Cultural imperialism at its worst. You know the old joke:

"What do you call someone who speaks two languages?"

"Bilingual."

"What do you call someone who speaks three languages?"

"Trilingual."

"What do you call someone who speaks one language?"

"American."
Review By [ianquest] • Date [10 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fifty" from JasonBarnett
Review:
yeah, the Watcher's Council qualifies as a small business. I'm sure.
Comments from author:
In the United States, it does. Remember, almost everyone from the old Council is dead. They started from scratch in 2003.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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