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Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from DieselDriver
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"she hated the human monsters most; the demons had no choice in what they did, they were hard-wired to do evil. Human’s had a choice, they could choose to be good or bad, they’d chosen to be bad"

As has she. She just doesn't realize it. She can certainly get off on an insanity plea though.

One minor point: I noticed that you used "crutch" in a couple of places that look like they need "crotch".
Comments from author:
crutch/crotch; is interchangeable in English-English. When writing for a mainly American readership I usually use 'crotch' but sometimes crutch slips through.

'Those who fight monsters should make damn sure that they don't become monsters themselves.'

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [16 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from DieselDriver
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You know, I never did make the connection before. Kersey was the name of the Charles Bronson character in Death Wish, wasn't it?
Comments from author:
That's the guy!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [16 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from DieselDriver
Review:
Even with the mutilation of the dead guy (I refuse to call such a person, a victim) I don't have any sympathy for him. Self defense is totally justified and if the attacker dies, tough poopoo. He brought it on himself and that is just a whole bunch of people who won't be robbed, assaulted and maybe killed in the future. He made the choice to attack innocent people, he now will now be cast into the lake of everlasting fire for his sins.
Comments from author:
Cheers.

Y'know I had to go to the story to see which one it was!

Big into personnel responsibility me, it was the way I was brought up.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [7 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from WhippingDawn
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"Perhaps one of the Crane brothers? Niles or Fraser?"

Niles. I want interaction between Daphne and Kennedy. :D

Glad to read that Zoe will be back. What really surprised me though was to see Kendra alive and well, interesting idea, I hope it's not her last appearance (I know, I know, Wesley, Rona, Faith/Willow, now Kendra... I should start my own series, but even the story I had started writing, (1) my brain is stuck and (2) I've lost it when my notebook got berserk)

Anyway. Very good story, the ending is a bit incredible, but after all we know this is fiction, eh? I loved it. I hope to read more about Zoe, maybe even spin off to her own series. Good job!

Going to #12 now, thanks again!
Comments from author:
Thanks...did I mention Niles and Fraser? If I did I've totally forgotten about it.

Unfortunately I get the feeling I'm not going to write any of the spin-off stories I thought I was going to write. At the moment I'm writing more one-shots that series, plus I want to try and complete a couple of Grim Up North 2 stories.. Plus I sorta have an original fiction work in the pipe line which isn't going to be posted on TTH.

Glad you liked, although I get the feeling this one wasn't one of your real favs (whatever, can't win them all!).

The end, well that was taken very much from the film and oddly quite logical.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [WhippingDawn] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Selonianth
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Thing is, New York might've let her go free but the Council won't. Rogue Slayers are dangerous, especially when they are genuinely rogue.
Comments from author:
Yes but...

If the Council got her I wouldn't be able to use that character again and I have plans for Zoe.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [7 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from RafMereC
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Great as always.

Shades of Charlies Bronson at the end.

Raf
Comments from author:
But of course!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [30 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Mcspender
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Congratulations for such a cool tale dude =).
Poor Zoe, she will never be a whole person again, too bad.
And yeah, Viv's and Kenn reaction was veeery funny, I think they really should think about hiring a counselor, to help the girls about dealing with their lives.
See ya!!.

PS.: Why not both of them?. I can imagine them shrinking Buffy issues away xD.
Comments from author:
Perhaps one of the Crane brothers? Niles or Fraser?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [24 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
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First Kendra and now Zoe; both given a new life, but Zoe cannot give up. She has time to think through her actions and be more careful.
I wondering if the people who killed Zoe's mother and sister, were doing it to join an exclusive club. Each entrant has to do anything extreme and record it.
The painted symbols don't mean anything, they were lifted from a library book. The coincidence is Zoe finds the book in an old fashioned library that still uses cards that are inserted on the inside of the cover.
My take on the killers and the reason.
Comments from author:
Yep thats a good idea which I'll lock away for later use.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [24 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from eriktheviking
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A great story with an edge to it that really flashed me back to the DW movies. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank-you very much,

Cheers,
D.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [22 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from PATM
Review:
Detective stories? don't sweat it. Its basically a chase with lots of exposition. Which is one of the few times it is bearable to watch on tv. I like detectivating myself.
Comments from author:
I just don't feel comfortable. Now the fic I'm writing now has Faith being chased through the African bush by loads of local troops, now that's fun! And I type faster.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [21 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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A sequel idea I'd love to see you do - follow-up on the lead of the lighter. If Zoe's *really* smart, she'll start looking into a seer or a witch in LA to find out who killed her family for her.
Comments from author:
Actually that's given me an idea...y'know Amy is still out there somewhere? Amy and Zoe could make an interesting mix.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [21 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from TaraLi
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The only question I have is why Kendra - a *KNOWN* slayer to the Council - didn't report Zoe to the Council and have them take care of disappearing her (with Zoe's consent, after strong encouragement and discussion of the situation. As I recall, Zoe still doesn't know that she's a Slayer - but Kendra does!)
Comments from author:
Zoe knows she's a slayer, she's friends with Kennedy. Its just that she's not a full-time slayer.

I see the New Council (as run by Giles) as an organisation that will support young slayers but won't even suggest that a slayer becomes full time until after her 18th birthday or has finished School. The council isn't in to forcing slayers to work for them. After all there's enough girls and women out there who are full time slayers to keep a lid on things.

Kendra wasn't a full time slayer, she liked being a cop, but she also like to go out and slay. Night shift being a good reason to be out at night.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [TaraLi] • Date [21 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from (Current Donor)vidicon
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Poor Zoe. Once that step is taken, it is very easy to repeat it. I also fera that W&H might get their hooks into her. And the Slayers are not going to be happy with her either. She'd better not step out of line. The cops might leave her alone, but I doubt the Council want a murderous Slayer out there.

Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
Indeed poor Zoe, if I get the opportunity I'll try to write something that finishes her story one way or another.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [21 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from AllenPitt
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I'm surprised slayers don't come into contact with the police/military etc a lot more in this verse. Any verse where so many exist at the same time. Also, wouldn't other groups manage to recruit at least 1 or 2? Does the new council really get 100% of them?
Maybe Zoe can recruit Justine and they can form a team of vigilantes.
Comments from author:
The thought that organisations might actively try to recruit slayers wasn't something I thought about very much until I wrote this fic. It's also something I'm going to address in later fics, even as I type I've got an idea for addition slayer involvement...a Speznatz (Sp?) slayer to counter Ranger Faith maybe, also I'm toying with having a couple of slayers jion the US Army and ending up in the 613th.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [21 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from MarcusRowland
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LA? Wolfram and Hart territory? They're going to be very interested in a Slayer who doesn't mind killing humans!
Comments from author:
Yep and in the Fita-verse W&H still have their offices in LA!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [21 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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