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Review of chapter "The Fourth Installment" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Interesting premise spoiled by a lack of any concrete narrative. It wanders around and gets lost too much to keep track of what's actually happening.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Fourth Installment" from cmdruhura
Your use of Black Holes to move directly from Point A to Point C without following the normal Curved Space Path through Point B is intriguing but also frustrating in that the intervening action that takes place at Point B is entirely left out and makes understanding of events tricky to say the least.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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