This was amazing and funny. I enjoyed your characterizations and just how confused 'poor' John was about how Faith knew all his secrets! Neat story. I'd love to see more PoI and BtVS stories.
Blue
Comments from author:
Thanks Blue!
I knew if I could get the Reese/Finch banter right, the story would work.
Review By [DeepBlueJoy] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I think you did a marvellous story crossing those two shows. The banter was exceptional. Had all the dry humour that POI has. Liked the Faith Reese banter too. Fun read. Thankyou. POI is one of my fav shows too.
Review By [jcon] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Most excellent. This cross needs a continuation with some more length to it. I think Finch meeting Willow and learning of her computer/magic skills would prove interesting. Of course, with Amy Acker playing Root, that could lead to interesting things as well. More Faith/Reese, though not as a romantic pairing. In fact, I would prefer no romantic stuff for this particular cross, but that's just my opinion. I thought you captured the style of PoI quite well and Dawn and Faith interacted well with this format. I look forward to a long sequel.... The one point deduction from a perfect score is because I want more....NOW! :)
Review By [maylith] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I don't watch this show, but I enjoyed your use of Dawn and Faith, and from what I've seen on the commercials, I had no problem getting to know Finch and Reese. Your writing is as usual up to its sterling standard vis a vis action and fight choreography, as well as realism.
If I had any constructive criticism for you it would be: you rarely write about feelings deeper than friendship and loyalty (at least, from what I've read). You do those well. I'd like to see what you could do with a romantic subplot.
Comments from author:
Try my story "Born Again"
Review By [Listener] • Date [24 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
It doesn't have to end does it? Enjoyed the whole thing, no exposition to speak of and John and Harold accommodating new circumstance with their usual equanimity. Nice