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The Secret Return of Alex Mack

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Review of chapter "Desert Flower" from raxadian
Review:
Why most doctors in fiction have to be crazy in some way?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Summertime and..." from raxadian
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Honesty, Alex going to the Air Force Academy would end with her being screwed over one way or another, due to the fact her ADN is no longer human. and Jack is not all powerful, he can't protect Alex every time. So I really, really hope she doesn't take the military option. Also, writing reports. Plus if she finds a cute guy she likes and also works for Jack she won't be able to have a relationship with him if both are military. So staying a civilian doubles her dating options!

And yes I know that her dumping such a loyal guy would be kind of a jerkass move, but it might happen.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Flank Attack" from raxadian
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And now you made me think in ponies.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mission Accomplished" from Starfox
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Good chapter - the kind of nice winding down one can expect from you after an Action arc, with characters touching base and getting grounded again in regular life. Well done!
Review By [Starfox] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mission Accomplished" from batzulger
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What is this 'Write too much' thing? How is that even possible...?

Disclaimer: There is a vague chance I might be slightly biased.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mission Accomplished" from RevDorothyL
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Oh, the possible Sam-and-Jack complication -- I hadn't thought of that, since Alex's universe's Sam seems to operate in a very different field from Jack's (most of the time). But it took years of risking their lives together and surviving all sorts of horrible stuff to bring the SGC's Sam and Jack so close together, and that's unlikely to happen under current circumstances.

Plus, I don't think Jack's the type who'd let himself even THINK about cheating on the woman he loves, let alone acting on it (or breaking up with her simply in order to be free to explore other options), so I'm still looking forward to seeing Sam become more closely allied with the SRI and its most important people, if that's what the almighty author has planned for them! :)
Comments from author:
Well, the Evil Authoress does have evil, evil plans ahead. So you'll get to see more of Sam, once she's healthy again.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [17 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mission Accomplished" from (Recent Donor)draconin
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I did wonder what might happen with the Sam/Jack vibe when they met. On the other hand, in SG1, when they first met Sam thought he was an irritating idiot and Jack thought she was a stuck up feminist (exaggeration but still). I can easily see Jack's jokes annoying her, Sam & Willow becoming BFFs and Jack feeling a bit left out.
Comments from author:
Well, you will get to see the Jack/Sam meeting. Just not in the next chapters.
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mission Accomplished" from Senko
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Fruitcake? But they're full of diamonds as an emergency stash because no one ever eats them till things are really, really bad and you need the gems.

Still looking forward to seeing what happens to the NID politically after they caused a major international incident like this.

As for the electric fence story you mentioned in another review yowtch, I had some people convince me to touch one by pretending it wasn't when I was standing on a metal cattle grid.
Comments from author:
There was an old "Not Necessarily the News" bit where they advised against giving old people fruitcakes 'because no one wants a gift that will outlast them.' I miss that show.
Review By [Senko] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mission Accomplished" from LFW
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Nice bit of science for Alex's powers and I am very impressed with how you tied it all together to get Sam and Vince healed
Thanks
Looking forward to more
Comments from author:
Thanks! I really wanted Sam to get to do the 'big ol' brain' thing that was one of her defining characteristics in Stargate.
Review By [LFW] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mission Accomplished" from (Recent Donor)Manchester
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Uh-oh. A gross-out story competition in the high school cafeteria...

Nobody ever topped my own which is a legend in our family: A friend's one-year old nephew found a set mousetrap and started playing with it. Five minutes later, that unfortunate kid needed an emergency circumcision at the hospital to finish the job.
Comments from author:
What is it with guys doing stuff with their pokers? My brother has a friend who peed on an electric fence. On purpose.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Manchester] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mission Accomplished" from SilverWave
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Fun fun fun.

OBTW - The toilet seat thing happened to an relative of mine :-)
Comments from author:
I first saw the toilet seat thing on an episode of "Emergency!" decades ago. Actually getting stuck may be an urban legend.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude IX" from raxadian
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So instead of a super soldier, she is creating the blob? She really must be insane.
Comments from author:
Well, she's already done the super-soldier, and who wants to repeat themselves? :D

Yeah, she's either crazy or she's got a motivation we have yet to see. Or both!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Seek" from raxadian
Review:
Hanna needs some training so she just doesn't go killing or injuring people...
Comments from author:
Yep. Hanna needs a LOT of training in a LOT of areas. All her life skills to date were how to track, stalk, fight, and kill things. She grew up with an out-of-date encyclopedia and a book of fairy tales.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mission Accomplished" from IronOx
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I know some people have complained that you write too much. Okay, if that's the case, why do I always want the chapters longer? This story is so immersive that when the chapter ends it feels like a reality reboot. Thank you.
Comments from author:
Yep, it's always 'make your chapters longer' and 'compress everything down a lot'. At least it's different people who say these things. :D :D
Review By [IronOx] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hunt" from raxadian
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Is nice to have help, but Hanna is basically Army Buffy, and she has no problems killing humans.
Comments from author:
Hanna isn't really like canon Buffy at all personality-wise. She's more like the classic 'fish out of water' character because she has no idea how to act like a normal teenager, except the parts she can fake.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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