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The Secret Return of Alex Mack

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Review of chapter "Prom" from Grovtech
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I loved the comment about nothing happening at the awards ceremony or the prom and this not being a comic-book. Looking back at Alex from the beginning to her now, you can really see how the character has developed. It's very much a show and not tell as the school's computer guru's got behind her and got the yearbook DVD's done not only timely, but fun too.

I'm still wondering just who is going to be her mentor, but that's because I've probably missed all the clues. I also have not the slightest idea of who Andrew, not-Andy, is. That only means I get to enjoy the total surprise of your reveal! :)

Grover
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prom" from Zeviz
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No attacks for the Pulitzer ceremony, or the exam week and prom? I am disappointed in the villains. :P

And it's impressive that you've managed to make more descriptions of everyday life sound interesting.
Review By [Zeviz] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prom" from SilverWave
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I was sure there was going to be a terrorist shootout at the airport, but then remembered that that had already been done, in a Whateley Academy fic :-)

Damn that was a shame, it was a hell of a shoot out.

hmm are you still doing Phase? - looks like they may have sorted the website out (at last :-) ).
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prom" from VillageOrchid
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I got one. And you know a lot of world-wide agencies are probably going to buy the left over year books. Enjoyed this. Hard to believe that neither the Pulitzer nor the prom was interrupted. Almost like she didn't live in a comic book. :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prom" from MarcusRowland
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Glad at least a couple of the milestones in her life went without supervillain problems. Don't know the upcoming crossovers at all.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prom" from Deadpan
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I've been awaiting Andrew since he got mentions a few chapters ago. I remember the show fondly. I have no idea who Craig is or what he's from.
Review By [Deadpan] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prom" from Harry
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Its nice to see Alex having some NORMAL time for a change, even with Mr. Pane spotting her in New York. And she got voted Prom Queen as well. Now, time to prepare for college and for some summer activities.
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from Zorgdub
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Diane Castle:
:D :D Hanna wears military gear on ops. Where's a Terawatt t-shirt going to fit in there?

Not when she's undercover! Or if something happens when she wasn't prepared to ... no, scratch that, this is obviously never going to happen. The undercover one is good enough.
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from Zeviz
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"Okay, she just really hoped Hanna didn’t have a Terawatt t-shirt she wore on ops. That would be totally embarrassing for Alex."

I got the following mental image:
Alex enters a conference room at the main SRI base and sees Hanna and Grover both wearing Terawatt t-shirts. She begins to complain, but at this time the door opens and Jack and Willow enter the room, also wearing these shirts. Just as she starts to say something, the door opens again, and team one enters ... with all of them wearing Terawatt shirts. While Alex is speechless, the scientists enter the room, also wearing the same shirts. When team two joins in, it's not really a surprise. Alex leaves the room to regain her composure, but sees that every soldier in the hallway is wearing a Terawatt shirt. She runs outside, and sees the shirt worn by every person on the base.

The scene shifts to Maggie Walsh, working in her lab, cackling over some sinister concoction she is holding in a test tube. As she turns around, we see that under her lab coat, she is also wearing a Terawatt t-shirt. At this point, Alex wakes up. :P

PS Unless the next chapter will be called "Off Months", it looks like the quiet days are about to end. My guess is that there will be an attack at the Pulitzer ceremony, and possibly also at Alex' graduation (with the intention of getting Terawatt to fly in to the rescue).
Comments from author:
:D :D :D The dreaded Alex nightmare. It's even canon, with two episodes turning out to be dreams, and Alex getting what amounted to a prophetic dream in the series finale.

Alex is going to find some stuff to do. That's all I'm saying.
Review By [Zeviz] • Date [28 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from EdBecerra
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The problem is, thanks to an old parody story a friend of mine did, instead of a Pulitzer Prize, I'm "hearing" people talking about the Putzpuler Prize for Journalism...

Which, sadly, is a rather accurate award for SOME reporters. :P
Comments from author:
On the Pulitzer Prize website, they point out that it is pronounced like 'pull it, sir' which sounds like the punchline to a bad joke.
Review By [EdBecerra] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from Zorgdub
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~~[ Okay, she just really hoped Hanna didn’t have a Terawatt t-shirt she wore on ops. That would be totally embarrassing for Alex. Hanna probably wouldn’t be embarrassed at all. ]~~

This must happen. If nothing of the sort took place by the time the story is over, I will be very disappointed in you.
Comments from author:
:D :D Hanna wears military gear on ops. Where's a Terawatt t-shirt going to fit in there?
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter, nice mix of serious and not so serious issues and tasks.
Comments from author:
Well, she's getting a little downtime. But stuff is about to happen.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from Amberdrake
Review:
Nice chapter. Once again showing that while the powers make her super, it's the person that makes her a hero.

On another note I was going to recommend a Whateley OC story I just found here only to see that you were the first to comment. :)
Comments from author:
I often notice Whateley material. :D
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from RockyWilliams
Review:
Great story! Don't know why I haven't read it before now, but I just spent my free time during the last three days getting through it, and I enjoyed it all.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing and thanks for recommending it too. I think the problem is the vagueness of the 'multiple crossings' category, combined with the main character not being someone central to the site, like Buffy, Willow, Jack O'Neill, Batman, Hermione Granger, etc. (even if they are all there along with many others).
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Off Weeks" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Enjoyed this overall. The part with Alex standing up for Kelly was also really special. Lupo going to be at or around the Pulitzer ceremony so they have an extra Terawatt, or on the other side of the country to show Terawatt somewhere else?
Comments from author:
Well, that might depend on whether a Code Terawatt turned up the day of the award ceremony.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
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