Fury didn't expect that Buffy would be this tough to bargain with but there is a lot that could get wrong. Can't say I would be thrilled to put Slayers in a government agency.
Oh before I forget. Yay an update. Love it.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Not Rated
aww come on update. I want to see Scott's and Buffy's face when they discover they have the same last name. And both "Bossy". Bonus would be if they are family they thought were dead or something.
So please update and yes I read it again. Darn pathetic I know but hey can't help it they never bore.
I love the bonding time between Buffy and Logan. Would be fun if Scot and Alex will be their family. I can live with that. I like it when she and Dawn have more family. Knowing Buffy she will do anything to shock Scott if she knows she how to get on his nerves.
Wondering what Xavier thinks if he can't read Buffy's mind. He will be so lost. He always pokes around in someones mind. To much I think. He always forget that someone mind is a private matter and it none of his business and he depends to much on it. When there is danger it's a different matter, don't get me wrong.
Well I can't wait what will come next. Good writing, thank you.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [16 Jan 13] • Not Rated
> “My spidey senses are tingling. Come on, let’s get them before they run.”
It's rather unlikely Buffy would say that.
You have to be careful of idioms when writing a crossover; Unless the crossover universe is extremely AU, you won't find X-Men comics in a world where the X-Men really exist. You probably won't hear someone make a "Holy Whatever, Batman!" comment in a world where the Dark Knight really does patrol Gotham. Likewise, Spiderman exists in the same universe as the Avengers and the X-Men do, so unless the comic book universe you're mixing with BtVS is one of those extreme AUs, Buffy would never have associated spider senses with a danger sense. And if she did, Logan might just accuse her of stealing Mr. Parker's lines rather than not understanding what she means.