I truly loved this, and hope your Muses bug you to a Sequel Of Stellar Magnitude!c Like say, Rooster is attracted to the girls, but Joyce and Jenny are the ones that really catch his eye and libido, with shenanigans all around resulting.
The roared out comment at the end cause all three girls to have some serious and disturbing - for their equanimity, that is - vivid dreams, even though Willow is the only one to have all three involved... well, to begin with.
The idea of Rooster and Xander gradually merging while retaining the spectral weapon is a fascinating one; too bad you didn't allow Xander his Winchester rifle as well as his Army Colt... I can just see Xander striding down the street, firing the Colt with one hand, the Winchester in the other, spinning the rifle around and chambering another round like in the galloping gunfight...
I gotta go watch the movie again...
Review By [trongod] • Date [17 May 13] • Not Rated
I think you at least need an epilog. You were using quotes for Xander's dialog. So that means he said that out-lout in front of the girls...er... terrifying young women who probably have a change of clothes in their gym lockers.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good development chapter.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Continuation would be nice but I don't see why the girls would be pissed over something he had no control over... then again teenage girls.
Review By [TheDivineDemon] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Please continue. I never thought Rooster would be a good mix with BTVS but this story proves it is. Great work.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [26 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Talk about major culture shock...a lawman transplanted way out of his own time has to learn and deal with the modern day. He may teach Xander a thing or two about standing up for friends and what's right, and he might even compel Xander to get his grades up. In the meantime, Xander can teach Rooster how to live sober, if he can keep the old coot from getting Xander's hands on the good stuff now and then.
What's ol Rooster gonna think when Xander loses his eye to Caleb a few years on and afterward when the Slayers go public? And then there's Wi-Fi! Jehoshaphat, what's Rooster gonna think about all these new-fangled dee-vices and little bitty picture screens that change when ya touch'em?
LMFAO.....:P
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [26 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]