Review of chapter "The Wolf comes out to play!" from HMaxMarius
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Hey Harry,
Can you clean up the formatting? I don't think you wanted the whole thing to be italics and more than half of it bold.
-hmm
Edit: You never 'closed' your html commands... for example, when you want the italics to end, you need to put a < / i > after the last word italicized. Similarly for bold you need a < / b >... (remove spaces)
Edit 2: Okay... I fixed the coding on your story. Couldn't figure out what you were trying to emphasize with the bold, so I left it out. I'm adding you to Battlefront. If you would like, before posting, send me your word document with the italics and bolds you want and I'll put in the codes and send it back to you so you can see how they should look and all you have to do is cut and paste it into the 'add chapter' function.
Comments from author:
Its weird. I did it just as the instructions stated to set up the formatting, and it came up this way.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [7 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wolf comes out to play!" from trongod
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Hoo Yeah! Airwolf & Co. is coming to the party!!
Not to mention a ragtag Fleet and some very interesting fighters form Dune!!!
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Lets just say that the Lady is NOT the only one coming in. I've got a friend who I am trying to convince to bring in some BIG and POWERFUL help.
Review of chapter "The Wolf comes out to play!" from DarthTenebrus
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HTML issues aside, good start, and welcome to the party at last, Harry!
Now let's see what Airwolf can bring to the fight!
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Air support, 50 caliber machine guns, stinger and hellfire air weapons. Give me the location, and the lady will be there. AND, the Hawkes WILL find a way to give O'Neal a hard time about college!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [6 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Colonies answer the call to help" from Harry
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*Raises BOTH EYEBROWS* Jack knows of Glactica?! Now THIS is something I didn't expect! But the more help the better. And with Sam and some of the others helping out, the combined crew of Humans and Cylons should be ready to rumble a LOT sooner than planned!
Comments from author:
The call between Adama and Jack would be considered standard communications protocol. Secondly the message was from the SGC. Before the Coloinals get fully into the fight, the battlestars must be serviced and rearmed. As soon as sam and her team get aboard them, she will have to build a mobile drydock using the Asgard database a a tool. Also consider that the Days of the Colonial fleet are numbered and the JCS will get a major shakeup. More details to foliow
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Colonies answer the call to help" from HMaxMarius
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Nice way to bring the 'rag tag fugitive fleet' into the picture.
Suggestions? Maybe send the civilians off to the Alpha, Beta or Gamma sites. Or all three, to prepare the way for possible civilian evacuation. The ships could then return and either stand by or begin evacuating civies from the combat area and relocating them to one of the Earth alternate sites.
The centurions will be quite useful, if they're willing to engage the demons.
I think you're already on tap for Battlefront. I'll double-check and if you're not, I'll get you set up.
-hmm
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Colonies answer the call to help" from Dragonwolftiger
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Welcome to the War. I can see the colonials supplying air cover and evacuation support with the Cylons and colonial marines keeping a portion of the front occupied.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I feel that the personel will be used for air support and orbital bombarment. The Centurions and the Colonial Marines are for shock and awe attacks more of a 'Delta type unit' for Jack. and load incenderiaes with them aganist vampires, and the dust will be flying at range. The Fighters are ment as a commanders shotgun and if another unit needs air support a squadron of Raiders could jump in, fire their missle load and leave with little to no losses. This is what I am thiking of. Thank you for your review
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No man can escape his Wyrd, but it can be changed." from Dragonwolftiger
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Sweet I look forward to your contribution to the war effort.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No man can escape his Wyrd, but it can be changed." from DarthTenebrus
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His name is a killing word. They are ready to fight, especially since he has conquered Shai-Hulud. Blessed be the Maker and his Water, may his passing cleanse the World ...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No man can escape his Wyrd, but it can be changed." from SamDragon
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Nice addition to the forces.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No man can escape his Wyrd, but it can be changed." from HMaxMarius
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Ooo! Nice! I'm guessing a guild navigator or Paul couldn't have brought a 'Highliner' through the twisting paths of hyperspace... Good thing Jack isn't going to have to deal with the Atreides House Atomics ;)
I presume that this is set in the Mua'dib imperial period between Dune and Children of Dune. What are the Fremen Feydakeen going to make of such a moisture rich world?
Anyway, welcome aboard! Pick an SG and Slayer Team (other than 1 or 15) to relieve or join on the perimeter. I'll get you added into the Battlefront list.
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... and among the seers of the world the whisper 'Usul is coming' began to quietly grow and spread...
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No man can escape his Wyrd, but it can be changed." from Dragonwolftiger
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Great nice to see another group. Twenty four vs. over a million and increasing, Paul and Gurney maybe the only ones to make it back. If you need support have the navigator or Paul contact the Baldur (Asgard Class Hospital Ship) any time after 5+ days. Not only do they have the Nanotech to heal injured fighters, but they'll have a company or two itching to return to the fight. Standard company is 262 including equal numbers of Jedi, troopers, and Synths. Troopers include any Star Wars race, including wookies.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No man can escape his Wyrd, but it can be changed." from Harry
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Yes, YEs, YES! DUNE! I have LOVED the books and now get to see Paul in action! Let the demons beware: Mau'dib is coming!
Comments from author:
Well, actually, Paul had to stay on Dune, but the Feydakeen, and the man who actually TAUGHT Paul a good deal of what he knows about fighting, AND managed to survive UNARMED in the dueling pits of Giedi Prime? STILL impressive.
Then again, with ALL of the Fremen being Spice dependent, it would be the wiser decision, to have the ones that made their travel possible with them...Good idea. Now as soon as I can, I'll add them to the Battlefront.
Review By [Harry] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jedi Potter & Company" from Harry
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Potter as a Jedi? This I have to read and see! Now, let the efforts commence to bring in help.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jedi Potter & Company" from Rich
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An excellent addition to the cause, and we need all the help we can get. We already have people from the "standard" Starwars and HP universes - this could lead to some "interesting" meetings.
Also, to underscore what HMM has already said : this is a ten week campaign, over a front which is hundreds of miles long. You can pretty much insert your force at any time during that span, and any place along the front, or even behind the front.
Review By [Rich] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jedi Potter & Company" from HMaxMarius
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Interesting start. I take it that these forces are from a HP/Star Wars crossover you've written? (Shiny linkage???)
I'm very interested to see where you set things up! I'll add you to the Battlefront fic. Remember, you don't have to drop your forces in after thing's Rich's Redrock Rangers have done, just make sure you don't reference their events until after they have happened in your story's timeline.
Thanks again for joining the story!
hmm
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated