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Review of chapter "THE PRINCE’S VIGIL" from FireWolfe
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Love the chapter on honoring the dead. However I do have a question. How is Harry Potter able to out rank HRH Prince Harry as he would have been in the service longer and already served two combat tours. Just a question?
Comments from author:
Harry is a Col. In Chief, the same as Charles, William and Phillip. Prince Harry had not been afforded that honor yet.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [14 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "COM-CON PART 1" from clei
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I know I'm not only one who become slightly confused by this story. Exactly when do the events in
the story take place? In the present or a couple of years in the future?
Comments from author:
time line is spring summer 2005. However some of the faces are current day. The allies are coming from different realties
Review By [clei] • Date [7 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "COM-CON PART 1" from djhardim
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Looks good. A couple of things

Each stealth fighter released two 1,000 -- -- laser guided bombs.

You are missing a word between 1,000 and laser. Are those 1,000 pound laser guided bombs?

If so, a question: considering their target, would that be enough to do the job?

ROMULAN REPUBLIC WARBIRD

Shouldn't that be ROMULAN EMPIRE WARBIRD?

@Harry - The Romulans are on the side of the good guys. It was the UCF that got the wakeup call.
Comments from author:
The bombs were standard Laser guided bombs. In Refernce to the Romuans. My Startrek is from Star Trek Online Time frame 2410 CE years after the events that destroyed Romulan space. The empire is there but in a civil war with the republic, however the republic is reconized by both the Klingon and Federation governments as the rightful rulers of Romulan space
Review By [djhardim] • Date [6 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "COM-CON PART 1" from Harry
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I think that the Romulan Empire just got a wake up call! What they just heard will be enough to make them back off and at least be watching. BUT, they will not get involved unless they are attacked first! That is the Romulan way, they are counter/shadow punchers. Now is the time for the allies to work together and give the demons something to think about. And that means that Airwolf is going to be doing her part as well.
Comments from author:
Harry this is the Romulan Republic of Star Trek Online 2410 CE. The Star Empire is considered a rogue state by both the Klingons and the Federation.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relief at Council House One" from FireWolfe
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You know it kind of sounds like the world governement is falling under the provence of the UK and the crown. Oddly even though I am an American that idea does not really worry me all that much. At least if the current Queen is on the throne. I know the character you made is a fictionalized version but somehow I have a feeling the character rings really close to the real thing. So maybe its a good thing she is in charge in the world you made. To bad she can not kick ass in the real world the same way. We might not have the mess we currently have if she could.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "COURAGE, DUTY, HONOR" from DarthTenebrus
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Any late blooming ideas about a chapter from the Demons' perspective?

And what news from the Klingon High Council? The Romulan Senate? Also I do believe I made a very brief mention in one of the first chapters of "Stand and Be Counted" of Dominion involvement in the form of a contingent of Jem'Hadar troops, does that give you any ideas there for the final push to close the Cleveland Hellmouth?

Looking forward to the eventual endgame...
Comments from author:
Darth to answer the question on demons, I may have a chapter soon regarding them. However we are at t-4 as the missles have been fired. Klingons have a greater understanding of the crown and the slayers are considered officers of the crown. Several of the High council are there and helping in the battle. They will sing song about the glory in the battle for years to come.


To Firewolfe, to answer your comment. For years the crown has by its agents, the watchers council failed to protect their agents. The US government is cleaning house (HYRDA) and with the invasion has enough on its plate. In the new Tauri Federation, the US will have a sizeable voice, yet for now the Queen is minding the store
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "COURAGE, DUTY, HONOR" from Harry
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I can understand WHY this was done to the political officers. It was disgusting, disgraceful and without honor! Now, Rico's forces are in a group that is going to work with them, aid them in the battle, and this incident is going to be told in song in the Klingon Houses! Hell, even Kirk could understand something like this! Now, I have to get to work on two ideas that are floating around in my head: One that I have already started on, and the other something that I mentioned early on in the battlefront where Airwolf is concerned. Now, lets get the strike forces ready, and, as I said when the Pack made their strike against the Sith Lord, THE HEAT IS ON!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ONLY 12 LIKE HER" from djhardim
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I'm reminded of the old joke about George Washington's hatchet.

This is Jim Kirk's original Constitution class Enterprise. We had to replace the warp nacelles, and the primary and secondary hulls. It does occupy the same space.

EDIT: How does the new power plant compare to the old?

EDIT1: By any remote chance, do you have a drawing of what the refitted Enterprise looks like?
Comments from author:
Saucer had to be replaced, warp nacelles replaced to undemanding versions based on the new power systems (She has a Defiant class power plant in her), and both fore and aft torpedo launchers (Original did not have aft tubes). Additionally she has a point defense weapons system aka what you saw in Trek 2009 movie, and finally the armor suite from Voyager,

Reply: look in to Star Trek 2009 Enterprise as a basis for a picture but with an aft torpedo launcher both firing quantum or Transphasic torpedo's. Power plant of a Defiant is ten times more powerful that the enterprise originally but the power needs for the new systems require it. The power level is just a guess
Review By [djhardim] • Date [18 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ONLY 12 LIKE HER" from DarthTenebrus
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When I saw the title I thought this would have Cylons running about and mucking up the works for the forces of Hell. So it begs the question, twelve what? As for the original Constitution-class refit USS Enterprise returning, ahh, nostalgia. ..but I thought the new Enterprise was a battlestar.

And did anyone have an idea to close out the Thanaton story arc, or do I have to come back and do this myself lol?
Comments from author:
Kirk in the original series commented that the enterprise was one of 12 Constitution classes built. That is where the title of the chapter comes from. Darth you said that we could not capture or kill him. Therefore if you want to end his arc then write away. Because I have ideas, yet to respect your request I have not done so.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ONLY 12 LIKE HER" from Harry
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I can see Jim's eyes getting wet, seeing his original command, the ORIGINAL Enterprise back! And Jack, you so much as TRY to take this craft out, you are going to be in trouble, BIG TROUBLE! Now, time to let Bond and Draco go to work. And a reminder to the Klingon's of House Duros: FOLLOW ORDERS OR ELSE! And it won't be your house heads dealing the punishment. OH NO! It will be either B or F doing that!!!
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Not so fast Harry, it will be used as a training ship after the battle, so he could command a cadet cruise in the future. But consider this also. Jim'Pok has a time bomb on his own rule. If Buffy or Faith felt that Jim'Pok and the Klingon Nation had wronged the slayers, the B and F along with the House of Longbottom might take over and have you ever thought Buffy as Chancellor. Maybe not B or F but Worf. Call it getting a second chance as he was offered the post during the dominion war, but gave it to Martog
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relief at Council House One" from FireWolfe
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Very great additon. I love that demons fear Klingons it is fitting. I do hope Buffy takes Duraus head lol. Hope Worf finds peace in this universe. Anyway great addtions to the story line.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "RETURN OF SOME NORMALCY" from Harry
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Switzerland with Teeth. I LIKE IT! And with help such as the Vulcans, Ferengi, Klingons and others, Earth WILL develop that reputation!!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE HOUSE OF LONGBOTTOM" from DarthTenebrus
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Too bad it wasn't the House of Duras, maybe that would have changed the timeline and in the good old 24th, Lursa and B'Etor might not be the conniving, honor-less beeyotches that they were in STTNG...now those were two Klingon chicks I would like to have gotten to know. ..
Comments from author:
You got your wish. Duras is on notice. The empire will never be the same again.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE HOUSE OF LONGBOTTOM" from Harry
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Neville just earned some SERIOUS respect points from the Klingons! To defeat the head of this fleet, in single combat, will have songs made and sung about this fight, bringing it back into the honor of the fleet and the Klingon nation. And this many warriors: BREAK OUT THE BATHLETS!
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE T-BOMB MEETING" from DarthTenebrus
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Oh, there had to be a spot of humor just before the big deployment. ..Klingons and tribbles and Cylons, oh my...

Still looking forward to Harry's spec ops chap, and for the record, in the absence of quadrotriticale, what was the grain stock that went with the tribbles? LOL...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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