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Review of chapter "THE T-BOMB MEETING" from DarthTenebrus
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Oh, there had to be a spot of humor just before the big deployment. ..Klingons and tribbles and Cylons, oh my...

Still looking forward to Harry's spec ops chap, and for the record, in the absence of quadrotriticale, what was the grain stock that went with the tribbles? LOL...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE T-BOMB MEETING" from Harry
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*Starts rubbing hands in glee with Evil Grin* First off, Hockstetter is as good as dead. Red does not let her anger come to the forefront very often, but when it comes to her family, all bets ARE OFF! General Burkhoff and Major Hochstetter, being officers, one Luftwaffe the other Gestapo, WILL pay for what they did.

Now, as far as the Nike, I approve of their mission wholeheartedly! The Cylons will NOT know what hit them, and their ability to make war is going to be GONE! Between Tribbles and Klingons, they Cylons are GONE! May as well take them off the list of foes for Ragnarok. They will not be able to do ANYTHING!
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE T-BOMB MEETING" from FireWolfe
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The poor poor tribbles.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THE T-BOMB MEETING" from AndreaMaine
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I had to laugh through the second part, because I can see Cavil going all sorts of apeshit over millions and millions of Tribbles on his ships.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "PAPA BEAR PART 2" from FireWolfe
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Please oh please let Willow do the interagation. I so want to see her show the SS what they pissed off. I am willing to bet she lost family and would love to have a nice little chat with the bastards.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "PAPA BEAR PART 2" from fanreaderonetwo
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Noting that your german place and name spelling needs work, forex IIRC the Gestapo's name was _Hochstetter_ not Hogstetter, also the town was Heidelberg not Hidleburg.

Also it was show canon that Klink had been an incompetent boob during WW1 (25 years earlier). A superior German officer mentioned that Klink had panicked while flying (IIRC as an flying _instructor_) and nearly killed both of them, leaving the officer with an injury that _still_ bothered him every time the weather changed.

Curious, was your alt Schultz also "playing stupid"?
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [9 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "PAPA BEAR PART 2" from JamesBrown
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ironically,Werner Klemperer and John Banner
who played Klink and Scholz respectively
were both of Jewish descent, and despised the Nazis.

Klemperer only took the role after he was promised
that Klink would not be a Nazi officer
and would be written as a bumbling incompetent.

Banner,who lost his family to the camps and only survived
because he was in Switzerland when the Nazi invaded Austria,
played Scholz as a good man who had a pretty good idea what was going on
but who tried very hard to 'see nothing'.
unfortunately he passed away only a little over a year
after the series ended.

as to the story,while I am continuing to read it is getting harder and harder
to keep my interest.
while the individual chapters are mostly well written, The overall plot
keeps sliding all over the place like a drunk driver on an icy road.
it is unfortunately a hazard with a round robin style story.
and as more and more crossovers are added to the the story
the larger overall arc has been becoming muddier and harder to follow.
I don't know if there's a moderator approving the various chapters
but I really think serious thought should be put towards trying to tie up
at least some of the loose ends and coming to a conclusion.
I for one have completely lost track of the demon invasion that started this thing.
Review By [JamesBrown] • Date [9 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "PAPA BEAR PART 2" from Harry
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So, Klink was running his OWN operation in Germany, and Hilda was a potential! No wonder Klink acted like a Dummy so much of the time, along with Schultz. As for Berkhalter and Hochstetter, those two are in DEEP TROUBLE! And when Buffy gets upset, I have some friendly advice: GET OUT OF THE WAY! Someone is going to be on the receiving end of that anger, and I don't want to be around when that happens. NO WAY NO HOW!
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "PAPA BEAR" from DarthTenebrus
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A real bomb, on the demons, I hope gets dropped, and not a thermonuclear device either. ..With all the technological and magickal forces aligned against the denizens of the outer darkness, one might surmise that the use of nuclear weapons would be totally unnecessary, yes?
Comments from author:
Darth not that type of bomb will be dropped. Why was Wilhelm Klink friendly to Hilda all the time. Some one will get their calling.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "PAPA BEAR" from Harry
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LOL! ROFL! As soon as I saw the two people who came out of the Tree Stump I KNEW who we were dealing with! Still watch Hogan's Heroes every now and then on MeTV. I wonder how well Papa Bear and company will be able to help out with this situation. *HOGAN DISSSSSMISSSSEEED!*
Comments from author:
Remember Hogans unit was intelligence and espionage. For members of the OCS school, the camp may become a location of learning of operations behind enemy lines. Hint, Hint.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "PAPA BEAR" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Sorry, but you need to work on this chapter. Needs more to it. Missing punctuation. Just needs work.
Comments from author:
this is just a teaser I just got back and needed to set the scene the next couple of chapters. Who would you have direst the sabotage operations of the teams already in theater but a team of saboteurs. As I said this was something short and with intent. However thank you for commenting
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [5 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Honor the Ambassador" from markuop
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Well done Harry. I was expecting dome of the combat, but that is ok. Looks like next is me and a Starfleet wedding since the Vulcan part of the ceremony is concluded. Jim Kirk has to conduct a wedding. He has done that a couple of times before. Well Done and I await you next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the compliment. As for the next part with the Pack, that will probably either come at the meeting with Buffy, or in the attack on Cleveland. If it is Cleveland, I am DEFINETLY going to have to break out some heavy duty gear for my girls! And you might want to consider if you want a Federation wedding or a Vulcan wedding. Your call, but I would think that with Spock being Vulcan, and the one performing the ceremony being Vulcan, as you mentioned previously, sounds to me like a Vulcan wedding in the near future.
Review By [markuop] • Date [7 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "MEANWHILE AT THE SGC...." from DarthTenebrus
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With Slayers and their Watchers, Jedi, Sith Imperials, Kobollians and Cylons, benign demonkind and selfish humankind, Elves and Dwarves, Aesir and Olympians, Mobile Infantry and the Redrock Rangers, as well as numerous other unmentioned yet still remembered fighters with honor (long live the fighters!)...

So begins the birth of a new Federation and its mighty Star Fleet
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [1 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "MEANWHILE AT THE SGC...." from Harry
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I see that Sarek and Spock are going to have a logical discussion, after the funeral service, over his new mate. However, I think that Sarek will find Spock's mate one who can support him both as a mate and one who understands the Vulcan logic. And The Lady is at JFB Hogwarts getting loaded up with Firebombs to give the demons a HOT FOOT! And, she will be used to help the naval forces get some target practice for their big guns. And, with what is going on, I really need to get the JFB Wolfpack team trained in at least the basics. THEN, its going to be time for the Pack to relax a little in either Hogsmeade or maybe in Glasgow or London, before the final battle starts!
Comments from author:
The Kali-fee is the place of marriage and challenge. Since Fleur will not challenge the bonding, there will be no fight. The Captain of the T'pau will officiate the bonding. (Relative of the old lady). The slayers will be present to demonstrate the Challenge for a purpose of a learning experience only. (Duel will not be to the death and the weapons will be blunted for the demonstration). The choice of Duel participants from Team Athena is yours. Your chapter to write.
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "AND FOR SOMETHING COMPLETELY DIFFERENT" from DarthTenebrus
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Good job with the commentary, though I know next to nothing about cricket; being American (big shock, right?), I'd have to know what a crumpet is first, which I don't.

As for the teams, I've noticed that at least one player on each team is Force-sensitive. Two we know right off the bat; they're Slayers. So what of the other Jedi? Won't they get to play, as second stringers at least? I imagine putting Jedi in the starting teams would make it a bit unfair for the rest, yes?
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [22 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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