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Review of chapter "ONLY 12 LIKE HER" from djhardim
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I'm reminded of the old joke about George Washington's hatchet.

This is Jim Kirk's original Constitution class Enterprise. We had to replace the warp nacelles, and the primary and secondary hulls. It does occupy the same space.

EDIT: How does the new power plant compare to the old?

EDIT1: By any remote chance, do you have a drawing of what the refitted Enterprise looks like?
Comments from author:
Saucer had to be replaced, warp nacelles replaced to undemanding versions based on the new power systems (She has a Defiant class power plant in her), and both fore and aft torpedo launchers (Original did not have aft tubes). Additionally she has a point defense weapons system aka what you saw in Trek 2009 movie, and finally the armor suite from Voyager,

Reply: look in to Star Trek 2009 Enterprise as a basis for a picture but with an aft torpedo launcher both firing quantum or Transphasic torpedo's. Power plant of a Defiant is ten times more powerful that the enterprise originally but the power needs for the new systems require it. The power level is just a guess
Review By [djhardim] • Date [18 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ONLY 12 LIKE HER" from DarthTenebrus
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When I saw the title I thought this would have Cylons running about and mucking up the works for the forces of Hell. So it begs the question, twelve what? As for the original Constitution-class refit USS Enterprise returning, ahh, nostalgia. ..but I thought the new Enterprise was a battlestar.

And did anyone have an idea to close out the Thanaton story arc, or do I have to come back and do this myself lol?
Comments from author:
Kirk in the original series commented that the enterprise was one of 12 Constitution classes built. That is where the title of the chapter comes from. Darth you said that we could not capture or kill him. Therefore if you want to end his arc then write away. Because I have ideas, yet to respect your request I have not done so.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ONLY 12 LIKE HER" from Harry
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I can see Jim's eyes getting wet, seeing his original command, the ORIGINAL Enterprise back! And Jack, you so much as TRY to take this craft out, you are going to be in trouble, BIG TROUBLE! Now, time to let Bond and Draco go to work. And a reminder to the Klingon's of House Duros: FOLLOW ORDERS OR ELSE! And it won't be your house heads dealing the punishment. OH NO! It will be either B or F doing that!!!
Comments from author:
Not so fast Harry, it will be used as a training ship after the battle, so he could command a cadet cruise in the future. But consider this also. Jim'Pok has a time bomb on his own rule. If Buffy or Faith felt that Jim'Pok and the Klingon Nation had wronged the slayers, the B and F along with the House of Longbottom might take over and have you ever thought Buffy as Chancellor. Maybe not B or F but Worf. Call it getting a second chance as he was offered the post during the dominion war, but gave it to Martog
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relief at Council House One" from FireWolfe
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Very great additon. I love that demons fear Klingons it is fitting. I do hope Buffy takes Duraus head lol. Hope Worf finds peace in this universe. Anyway great addtions to the story line.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [14 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "RETURN OF SOME NORMALCY" from Harry
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Switzerland with Teeth. I LIKE IT! And with help such as the Vulcans, Ferengi, Klingons and others, Earth WILL develop that reputation!!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE HOUSE OF LONGBOTTOM" from DarthTenebrus
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Too bad it wasn't the House of Duras, maybe that would have changed the timeline and in the good old 24th, Lursa and B'Etor might not be the conniving, honor-less beeyotches that they were in STTNG...now those were two Klingon chicks I would like to have gotten to know. ..
Comments from author:
You got your wish. Duras is on notice. The empire will never be the same again.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE HOUSE OF LONGBOTTOM" from Harry
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Neville just earned some SERIOUS respect points from the Klingons! To defeat the head of this fleet, in single combat, will have songs made and sung about this fight, bringing it back into the honor of the fleet and the Klingon nation. And this many warriors: BREAK OUT THE BATHLETS!
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE T-BOMB MEETING" from DarthTenebrus
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Oh, there had to be a spot of humor just before the big deployment. ..Klingons and tribbles and Cylons, oh my...

Still looking forward to Harry's spec ops chap, and for the record, in the absence of quadrotriticale, what was the grain stock that went with the tribbles? LOL...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE T-BOMB MEETING" from Harry
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*Starts rubbing hands in glee with Evil Grin* First off, Hockstetter is as good as dead. Red does not let her anger come to the forefront very often, but when it comes to her family, all bets ARE OFF! General Burkhoff and Major Hochstetter, being officers, one Luftwaffe the other Gestapo, WILL pay for what they did.

Now, as far as the Nike, I approve of their mission wholeheartedly! The Cylons will NOT know what hit them, and their ability to make war is going to be GONE! Between Tribbles and Klingons, they Cylons are GONE! May as well take them off the list of foes for Ragnarok. They will not be able to do ANYTHING!
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "THE T-BOMB MEETING" from FireWolfe
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The poor poor tribbles.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "THE T-BOMB MEETING" from AndreaMaine
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I had to laugh through the second part, because I can see Cavil going all sorts of apeshit over millions and millions of Tribbles on his ships.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [14 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "PAPA BEAR PART 2" from FireWolfe
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Please oh please let Willow do the interagation. I so want to see her show the SS what they pissed off. I am willing to bet she lost family and would love to have a nice little chat with the bastards.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "PAPA BEAR PART 2" from fanreaderonetwo
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Noting that your german place and name spelling needs work, forex IIRC the Gestapo's name was _Hochstetter_ not Hogstetter, also the town was Heidelberg not Hidleburg.

Also it was show canon that Klink had been an incompetent boob during WW1 (25 years earlier). A superior German officer mentioned that Klink had panicked while flying (IIRC as an flying _instructor_) and nearly killed both of them, leaving the officer with an injury that _still_ bothered him every time the weather changed.

Curious, was your alt Schultz also "playing stupid"?
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [9 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "PAPA BEAR PART 2" from JamesBrown
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ironically,Werner Klemperer and John Banner
who played Klink and Scholz respectively
were both of Jewish descent, and despised the Nazis.

Klemperer only took the role after he was promised
that Klink would not be a Nazi officer
and would be written as a bumbling incompetent.

Banner,who lost his family to the camps and only survived
because he was in Switzerland when the Nazi invaded Austria,
played Scholz as a good man who had a pretty good idea what was going on
but who tried very hard to 'see nothing'.
unfortunately he passed away only a little over a year
after the series ended.

as to the story,while I am continuing to read it is getting harder and harder
to keep my interest.
while the individual chapters are mostly well written, The overall plot
keeps sliding all over the place like a drunk driver on an icy road.
it is unfortunately a hazard with a round robin style story.
and as more and more crossovers are added to the the story
the larger overall arc has been becoming muddier and harder to follow.
I don't know if there's a moderator approving the various chapters
but I really think serious thought should be put towards trying to tie up
at least some of the loose ends and coming to a conclusion.
I for one have completely lost track of the demon invasion that started this thing.
Review By [JamesBrown] • Date [9 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "PAPA BEAR PART 2" from Harry
Review:
So, Klink was running his OWN operation in Germany, and Hilda was a potential! No wonder Klink acted like a Dummy so much of the time, along with Schultz. As for Berkhalter and Hochstetter, those two are in DEEP TROUBLE! And when Buffy gets upset, I have some friendly advice: GET OUT OF THE WAY! Someone is going to be on the receiving end of that anger, and I don't want to be around when that happens. NO WAY NO HOW!
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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