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Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from (Current Donor)Truthmaker
Review:
This gets better with each chapter.

Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I wouldn't be able to do it without my superbeta, Listener. If you like my stuff, you'll love his! Next chapter up soon, I promise.
Review By [(Current Donor)Truthmaker] • Date [2 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Greywizard
Review:
Okay I was reading the reviews and I just realized that I've never posted any reviews for this story, so I'm correcting that oversight now.

First off, I'm enjoying the various POVs you're giving us, and I'm eagerly waiting to see Xander's slant on the whole situation here.

I also thought that seeing Buffy's view of her relationship with Xander, and finding her insecurities spelled out in such detail isn't something that a lot of authors have done, so kudos to you for showing us that aspect of her! ;-)

This last chapter, with Xander apparently possessed, is quite intriguing and I'm hoping we see the next chapter soon, so we can find out more about what's going on.

Anyway, thanks for sharing this with us. ;-)
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading, and even more for reviewing! My main goal when I started this story was to capture the characters' inner thoughts as realistically as possible, and from there create a character driven story. Like you, I have seen too many people write stories that gloss over the emotional development of a character's arc, instead focusing on action and events. I am trying to integrate both here. I appreciate your seeing and appreciating what I am trying to achieve. Next chapter soon, I promise!
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [2 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Gideon
Review:
Well I think that counts as the ungentlest breaking of surprising news that I have ever seen! At least no-one is permanently dead (yet!) I am a bit confused by all that going on at once though. I hope the next chapter slows down a bit!
Comments from author:
Lol, I told you would be interesting, not gentle! Oh, the very next chapter slows down a lot. I just had to manipulate everybody into getting together, and they each had their own thing going on at first, so it took some doing. They are, however, where they need to be, and the rest is going to be getting into the plot a bit more, though character-driven story is very important to me. It's how I write, after all!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from cmdruhura
Review:
You seem to like awkward moments.
Comments from author:
Yes, I do. They are so pregnant with possibilities that they can go any way, and that is essential to organic growth of a story. I barely know what's going to happen next. Isn't it exciting?
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Gideon
Review:
Well done. This relationship may have come as a surprise to both Willow and Dawn but they are really getting into it! I hope they think of a way to break it to Buffy gently :)
Comments from author:
Lol, let's just say that chapter five is gonna be interesting! Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you enjoy the chapters to come!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [26 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from SamDragon
Review:
Very hot.
Comments from author:
Thanks! These scenes are the hardest to write well.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [25 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from topcat
Review:
Very Nice. I love where this is going. Dawn/Willow is one of my favourites.
Comments from author:
I've never actually read one before, and it never occurred for me to it until my plot called for it. Glad I'm doing it now, though, as I get to explore the relationship dynamics of such an odd coupling. Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you enjoy the chapters to come!
Review By [topcat] • Date [25 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from JasonBarnett
Review:
Willow does not strike me as the hopping in bed with a stranger type
Comments from author:
"So, you saw my status update?"

I was hoping this was enough to convey that they were previous acquaintances, but I'm sorry if that wasn't clear. But thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [24 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Bill
Review:
Good start!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I hope you'll continue reading!
Review By [Bill] • Date [22 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Oxnate
Review:
Highlander almost always crosses well with Buffy. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Cool. I'll try not to take too long.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [19 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from bucksavage
Review:
A very nice start! Your OC is just in the beginnings but so far he seems ok. Looking forward to seeing more from him. I also like the way you segued into the relationship between Buffy and Xander.
Comments from author:
Thanks! They say that death changes you, lol, but I wanted to at least establish a baseline for Joel so that I'll have something more to work with later on. I didn't want to spend too much time on him premortem because I wanted him to work on his character development via plotline in situ, much like I'm doing with Buffy and Xander. I really appreciate your feedback, and I thank you for leaving a review. I had no idea that I would get such positive reponses so quickly!
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [19 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from LordSchmodder
Review:
Interesting start.
You made me curious what will be happening to poor Joel.
Comments from author:
Thanks! The things that will be happening to poor Joel are just starting, I'm afraid. And not all of them good. . .

Thanks for the review, Lord Schmodder! I wasn't expecting such a positive response so soon!
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [19 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Gideon
Review:
Cool start. I like how your OC is well defined but doesn't start out by having a super life with all the advantages. He doesn't sound like the kind of guy Faith would go for either! I like Buffy and Xander together too and it sounds like you are making them real people with real problems too, which is much more realistic than some stories. I am kinda sad I didn't see them dancing around one another for a while though :(
Comments from author:
Thanks! I go by the philosophy that a true character arc involves actual character growth, and not just a static personality. Fortunately, I've also had actual relationships before, so I know that they don't start off hunky-dory and everything remains perfect forever, so you can count on quite a bit of "dancing" among our proposed couples in this story! Much character growth is to be had all around, so I don't expect people to be jumping into positive, stable relationships as their independent issues and psychoses just magically go away! Thanks for the review, Gideon! I wasn't expecting such a positive response so soon.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [19 Dec 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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