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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from loretta
Review:
this sounds like it will be a great story, i cant wait to see what will happen next
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, and glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [loretta] • Date [10 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from superfan
Review:
I hope he goes for the Space-Marine/Charmed/Bond combo.

I really enjoyed this. Hope for more.
Comments from author:
Yeah, that would allow for a whole lot of options, wouldn't it? ;-)
Review By [superfan] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from mendal
Review:
If you know anything about 3.5 the choice would psionists.


EDIT:In that case a monk should definitely be included.
Comments from author:
Not at all familiar with the 3.5 version, since when I played, psionics were in the supplement in teh back of the book and were all determined by rolling the dice.

But, I have my own plans for what is and isn't available, as you'll soon see. ;-)
Review By [mendal] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice start on the story, I hope to read more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Working on the chapter as my muse dictates it to me. ;-)
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Miranda
Review:
I really like how this story is written so far.

I always love "super" Xander stories, but the one thing I would stress is that the automatic upgrade to being amazing at everything gets over used. Even Buffy took 7 years to get to a level able to take on extreme villains. I guess what I'm saying is that I want to see Xander's evolution.
Comments from author:
Not to worry too much.

Xander will honestly earn everything he gets. ;-)
Review By [Miranda] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from shakeval
Review:
probably some sort of war-born sorcerer who has a patron god or goddess that has taken a vested interest in it's new representative in this dimension, all xander has to do is occasionally give some sort of offering or pray every once in a while
Comments from author:
That's one possibility. ;-)

And remember, you get what you pay for.

Although the coin used may vary, depending upon location. ;-)
Review By [shakeval] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Selias
Review:
Huh. Interesting.
Comments from author:
Not to worry - it gets even more interesting soon.

In a Chinese proverb, 'May you live in interesting times' sort of way. ;-)
Review By [Selias] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
Another well written and depressingly plausible look at a future of humanity.
Comments from author:
Yep.

Whenever I'm feeling depressed, I just look at the world around me, and then I go and slice my wrists even deeper. ;-(
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from djhardim
Review:
Give him the Ultimate version of the Super Soldier Serum and the appropriate training.

A moderate magic ability, a knowledge of the arcane and languages on a level with Giles.

In general, I would ask my counterpart what abilities the other Xanders found to be most useful.

Some abilities may be more compatible with Xander than others.

Note: Get Harry Potter trunk, some force lances, an Omni-Tool, etc.

After reading some of the previous reviews, I'm curious about psionics.

Does this story cross over with Heinlein?

EDIT: To be really, REALLY greedy, give him a Morphic Adaptation Unit
http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-8427/GandalfTG+Worthless.htm
Comments from author:
I've got a good idea of what Young Xander will be ending up with, and you'll see what that is, starting a couple chapters from now.

And giving Xander a MAU is definitely getting into Xander-Stu territory.

Not that that couldn't be fun, mind you. ;-)
Review By [djhardim] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Just remember TANSTAAFL!

Seeing what Xander has to do for the powers he requests will be fun!
Comments from author:
Most definitely. You get what you pay for - one way or another. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Studyofchaos
Review:
More please! Gambit powers for the thief bit is always nice... I liked the Charmed option and maybe Spiderman for the Warrior. Nice blend but not God like.
Comments from author:
Spiderman is definitely a really good general brick set for your basic character.

And you'll be seeing what Xander will be offered, and what he'll be choosing in upcoming chapters.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Sandi
Review:
I couldn't really take full advantage of a gift like that but my best friend would.
Comments from author:
Obviously, you've never used and abused the rules of any RPG before. ;-)
Review By [Sandi] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from lastjuan
Review:
Interesting to see that this story is all about dialog at least so far.
Comments from author:
Just as a warning, if you're looking for a lot of slam-bang! action in a story, you won't be seeing it in this story.

At least, not real soon, if at all.
Review By [lastjuan] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Vilkath
Review:
Like some one else said before the best thing to do in DnD is psionics. You can get access to a wide selection of powers that do most of the things that magic and Clerics can do and you can use them at any time. Sure you have a limited pool of PSP's to work with but other than that your good and you get those back automatically from either 8 hours of sleep or 4hrs of meditation. While with spells in most versions you have to have 8hrs of uniterupted sleep and then spend time memorizing the spells every day. Both clerics and mages suffer from this problem. In 2nd eddition it was 10min of memorization per spell level memorized. That means ONE 9th level spell is 90min of sitting and staring at a book....
Comments from author:
Just because AD&D was mentioned as an example, doesn't mean that their rules will be applicable to what is actually available.

'Game balance' is actually a fairly stupid idea when it prevents people from playing established characters. Have you ever tried to play a wizard like 'Gandalf' in AD&D? Not really all that easy to do, without making him god-like. ;-(
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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