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Review of chapter "Councilor Tevos" from LordSchmodder
Review:
Wow.
Very nice last line.
I appreciate your Mass Effect crossover very much!
Thank you!
Comments from author:
I try to make people happy. :)
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [19 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Councilor Tevos" from Valkyrie
Review:
Wait, so one of them was Prothean? Not sure I caught on to which one.
Comments from author:
Basically, despite what Liara claims in the first game, pretty much EVERY other asari says that the father species has an influence. I just took it one step further. We see a very krogan-esque asari in this (the Power Girl one, who has Wrex's overbite and 'Shepard' one-liner), and then another is an asari who contains Prothean genes and so she has extra eyes. I'll explain more about her - and possibly all of them - in Chapter 10 and 11.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [19 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Councilor Tevos" from raxadian
Review:
Can you say Ommisexual?
Comments from author:
Actually, as I've pointed out to a lot of people? She has very narrowly defined tastes in this story. It just seems that nobody's cottoned onto them.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [18 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elsa" from Valkyrie
Review:
Weird mashup. Still, I liked all three individually, so I'm willing to take a gander.
Comments from author:
Well, a common mechanic in Frozen crossovers has become self-induced cryo to bring Elsa out of the unknown past and into the era of the other fandom. I figured... why not go big?
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elsa" from stonegolem
Review:
Don't know much about Frozen, but I like it.
What I'm really looking forward to is Faith's introduction to Jack.
Comments from author:
Jack isn't the only thing they're finding on Purgatory...
Review By [stonegolem] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Elsa" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
I really like the version of Elsa you have going here. Out of curiousity, could her powers also help reduce the heat build-up from the Normandy's stealth systems? If so, it could massively extend the duration of some of their missions.
Comments from author:
Wink. Wink wink. Wink.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elsa" from raxadian
Review:
And now I am thinking in Faith literally keeping Miranda on a leash.
Comments from author:
Miranda isn't Faith's type in this. :)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Council" from raxadian
Review:
Yeah, she is Faith all right.
Comments from author:
This is kinda a 66/33 blend. Mostly Faith, but obviously there are elements of Shepard such as her biotics, her memories, and obviously her past life because people remember "Faith Shepard" existing before she actually did.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sha'ira" from raxadian
Review:
Leather pants?
Comments from author:
Think more a catsuit made of horizontal leather bands, with an extensive amount of technology embedded including shield generators and amplifiers for her biotic powers.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jeff "Joker" Moreau" from raxadian
Review:
Now that's a rude A.I.
Comments from author:
You get used to EDI. Joker hooks up with her eventually. :)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dr. Karin Chakwas" from raxadian
Review:
You could just do the broad strokes, or it will get boring.
Comments from author:
Each chapter is named after a character and will cover an encounter from along the storyline. None of them will be battles unless it's absolutely necessary, so we'll only really see that side of the plot by way of "we're gonna go do this" or "wasn't that wild" sort of mentions.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Veetor'Nara" from raxadian
Review:
Yeah, not to mention that with so many machines on her, they could assume direct control of her or something.
Comments from author:
The Collectors are actually biotech. So her biggest concern genuinely is why they seem familiar despite not having heard of them before that point.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Miranda Lawson" from raxadian
Review:
And that's what she said!
Comments from author:
Heh.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jacob Taylor" from raxadian
Review:
Oh, so magic still works?
Comments from author:
Is it? Or is any sufficiently advanced technology indistinguishable from magic?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Council" from JinaSolo
Review:
More please!

This is a very interesting interpretation!
Comments from author:
Funny you should mention this story...
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [24 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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