Love to see more of this. The idea has merit and it would explain a lot about Dawn's height and coloring. Of course it will freak out both Xander and Buffy. Mostly cause it was Faith he did the tango with lol.
Fire
Comments from author:
Yes, Dawn's height and complexion are different enough from Buffy's that you can't even consider saying that she's a clone.
Which means that someone else's DNA was added, and given the emotional support Xander was always providing Dawn in canon, made him a very reasonable possibility.
Besides, having Dawn find out her former crush is actually her father is just too good an opportunity for embarrassment to pass up. ;-)
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [20 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Very interesting so far, hoping for more soon. What other crossovers will you be using?
Comments from author:
I've got a couple possible plot bunyips nipping around my ankles, but I'm not sure whether I'll incorporate them or not, since it might unduly complicate things for this fic.
There's also the possibility I just might make them full stories in their own right, so my muse hasn't made a final decree, yet.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [20 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Maybe it's just me but NCIS and their "friends" are digging around in things that parts of the government higher in the food chain have classified. Things that are supposed to remain unseen and unheard. People who start digging around on the edges of things touching on classified material like that tend to get the attention of those who classified it in the first place. Who send someone to tell them to stop or they will spend a long time in Leavenworth or equivalent.
Comments from author:
You seem to have been reading my notes. ;-)
You're quite right, sticking your nose in classified business without being ordered to do so will invariably draw unwanted attention.
Review By [ImperialistDog] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Not Rated
It certainly looks like something is going on. Don't remember anything about Xander's father and money, but it's been a while since I've watched the series.
However, it's a fun "smoking gun" to have in the story.
Wonder if they'll find Hank Summers in somewhere like Thailand where child sex is available? Won't help with this investigation, but anything that would inconvenience a guy like that isn't all bad.
Thanks for the story.
Tom A.
Comments from author:
Nothing was ever said in canon about Tony Harris's money, and it's something I threw in to make things interesting. The actual explanation is that Tony happened to hit it big around that time in some illegal poker games, but it was only for a short while, and he never was anywhere near as fortunate since.
Like you say, it was a fun 'smoking gun' kind of incident to report on. ;-)
of course Magic can make things like DNA appear to be NOT what they were.
Of course the fact that the Order of Dagon got buffy's blood and tissue can also possibly mean they got Xanders as well.
Now of course come the really complicating factors of timing.
If Dawn's physical body was created at that early date then HOW would they know about Xander being one of those with her when she became a slayer?
Buffy was prophesized but Xander?
Not likely.
BUT if they took the samples when she was in Sunnydale it is possible.
DNA has no real timing factors involved from what I recall. It is or isn't without regards to time.
Of course then you still have magic.
Comments from author:
I always took the explanation given in canon as meaning that the monks created Dawn shortly before the beginning of Season Five, when Glory was getting close to finding them
And since Dawn doesn't look like a Buffy clone, then they obviously needed to use someone else's blood and tissue, too. So, with Xander being readily available around Buffy, they used his. It could just as conceivably have been Giles', or some random choice from anywhere in the world. I can't see the monks as ever considering using Angel's or Spike's DNA, though, since they were both vampires, and therefore dead bodies for the monks' purposes.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Wonderful story. Horrible idea. It gives me the shudders thinking of ANY government having that kind of power. It wasn't legal and they did it anyway. Scary.
Comments from author:
Yep. The potential for misuse of collected and collated information by people with good intentions is enormous.
And when you then add in all the bastards we know are out there, it's a terrifying thought.
Abby and McGee both violate a lot of laws regularly and repeatedly on the show with their hacking, and no one ever seems to say anything to them about it. Sooner or later, its' going to bite them in the butt.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I am enjoying how your story just gets more and more twisted. Of course all this is more logical than "Some monks did it." Yeah, right!
Comments from author:
Yes, logical inferences from available information can help you come to some very reasonable - yet still completely incorrect - conclusions, very quickly. ;-)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Very interesting - and a nice divergence from the "New Watchers Council runs roughshod over acronym of choice" meme.
Comments from author:
Yes, indeed. The Council would have to be very circumspect about throwing their weight around if they don't want to make a lot of enemies, unnecessarily.
It's amazing the conclusions one can draw from a lot of apparently unrelated information, isn't it?
The problem is, most conclusions lie those are wrong. Unfortunately, proving that they're wrong is exceedingly difficult, too. ;-)
I'm not clear on why both Summers parents had encrypted NID files, unless it's part of the whole "slayer secret" thing....? Also, Dawn was of course created magically, apparently from Buffy & Xander, so their whole '5 year old mother' thing is just them not realizing it. I think. That Xander is Dawn's father is really interesting and will be a huge surprise for him. Boy will she feel bad about wanting to be his girlfriend when she was little. Digging into their backgrounds will set off a lot of alarms, and not just at the NID, I would think... and since "NID" is involved that means SGC might get involved at some point...
Comments from author:
Buffy's and Xander's files (as well as Willow's and Giles' files, too) are all encrypted because they were involved with the Initiative. Not that anyone with any knowledge will ever admit that such a project even existed. ;-)
And given the way the monks' spell worked, it seems to have provided all the necessary data and documentation needed to prove Dawn actually was born when she supposedly was.
Yes, Xander being Dawn's father could provide a lot a lot of fun in the future, once that fact is revealed. ;-)
And poking around looking for information on encrypted files has the chance of causing a lot of people to suddenly start looking at who's doing the poking around. Which isn't necessarily something you want to have happen. ;-)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Good. Unless Loki was involved, this sounds more like an operation the Centre would pull.
The next step would be to check and see if Buffy and Joyce were hospitalized during that time period.
As I recall, the most notable example of a 5-6 year old giving birth was a South American girl, who suffered from a disorder that caused her to mature early.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. And yes, that does sound like something that the Centre would be involved in. ;-(
And yes, again, there are about a dozen documented cases of children under ten carrying their pregnancies to term. ;-(
Review By [djhardim] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Not Rated