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Review of chapter "Don't you just?" from Cdog
Review:
This is a really entertaining story. Only real critique that I have about it, is that sometimes you'll have Xander and another character speaking to each other in the same paragraph. When a different person starts to speak, you need start a new paragraph.

I hope that you continue this story.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't you just?" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Whith those tits, can it really be classified as soft tissue? Fun/strange/mad tale!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't you just?" from Genuka
Review:
You are very evil. More?
Review By [Genuka] • Date [7 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't you just?" from Bluesnowman
Review:
interesting
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't you just?" from Morgomir
Review:
Great story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting a mad God" from cynic
Review:
Ooo Bordrlands 2 ref, nice! Xander has made it to an extension of the Oblivion/Skyrim versenext stop Greybeards?
Review By [cynic] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
interesting start. keep it up and more soon please
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [26 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from omnimercurial
Review:
Moar!!! :) Liking this a lot!
Review By [omnimercurial] • Date [25 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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