Review of chapter "Don't you just?" from
CdogReview:
This is a really entertaining story. Only real critique that I have about it, is that sometimes you'll have Xander and another character speaking to each other in the same paragraph. When a different person starts to speak, you need start a new paragraph.
I hope that you continue this story.
Review By [
Cdog] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't you just?" from
nerfherderReview:
Whith those tits, can it really be classified as soft tissue? Fun/strange/mad tale!
Review By [
nerfherder] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't you just?" from
GenukaReview:
You are very evil. More?
Review By [
Genuka] • Date [7 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't you just?" from
BluesnowmanReview:
interesting
Review By [
Bluesnowman] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't you just?" from
MorgomirReview:
Great story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [
Morgomir] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting a mad God" from
cynicReview:
Ooo Bordrlands 2 ref, nice! Xander has made it to an extension of the Oblivion/Skyrim versenext stop Greybeards?
Review By [
cynic] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
EroSlackerMichaReview:
interesting start. keep it up and more soon please
Review By [
EroSlackerMicha] • Date [26 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
omnimercurialReview:
Moar!!! :) Liking this a lot!
Review By [
omnimercurial] • Date [25 Dec 12] • Not Rated
