Wonderful chapter. Thanks for the humor today. I needed that. You are very clever with this, but it seems like there is a lot that is missing here. Will more of this be coming in the future? I hope so!
Review By [scottm] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Fun run down of the craziness that's become Xander & Kennedy's lives. I love the idea of watching this crew going to town in lovely Las Vegas. Should be a heck of a show.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
So...there are now two Willows? Also, are they constantly being shadowed by a posse of 'justice' demons? I got the impression that ordinarily the W-word was only dangerous if there happened to be a demon around, and then only if you fit their particular clientele. I could be misinformed though, or this world could be different.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Sorry to take so long in reviewing, but I finally got the time needed to reread the previous story and then this, to make sure I didn't miss anything.
I'm enjoying the hell out of this one and all the changes - both explicitly and implicitly described - and am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
I loved the Xander-Buffy interactions and absolutely loved your version of a Tara who grew up with Xander supporting her. ;-)
Also loved the way Willow was introduced. ;-)
Great work, man, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks. This version of Tara's a bit of a 'what if', obviously, and it'll be both a bonus and a bummer at times.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [31 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Okay, let me get this out of the way first... THANK YOU!!! I was worried we might never see this from you and man am I glad I was worried for nothing. I love what you're doing with the characters. Tara with a lifetime of Xander for confidence would be OC to the series but still feels realistic, same with Willow backsliding to Oz. Buffy and Xander also feel true to the characters. I think Willow appearing in the coffee shop is priceless, looking forward to where this goes.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Not Rated
I had to skim over the previous stories thinking I must have forget something, but nope I remembered your 2 stories fine. You just decided to just toss this story with no background, so it makes no sense. It's like watching the 8th episode in year 3 of a show without watching any of the previous episodes. Depending on the show it might be fine for some people, but useless to others.