Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Thedruid
If I had not read the note at the beginning, the story would have not made any sense.
Comments from author:
Yeah. Which is why I mentioned it to start with.
Having said that, being so, so very vague is both an advantage and a disadvantage, namely because if I do decide to take it somewhere, I can move it away from GreyWizards story and insert whoever I want as the involved parties, the downside being that until then, you're perfectly right, it seems unconnected.
When I figure out what to do with it, I'll likely update the note in question.
Thanks for the feedback.
Review By [Thedruid
] • Date [30 Dec 12] • Not Rated