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Review of chapter "chapter 15" from Mcspender
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Nice to see Surayya's back, good times, good times xD!!.
So the Machines were surprised by the witches?. Nice, at least they now know they can be fooled xD.
And onto the next part, were the girls are gonna go a-hunting fer monsters!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
The monster hunt is on. There will be surprises.

See ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [13 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 14" from Mcspender
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Baaad Anne, no cookie fer ya :P!!!. Really, some higher level beings should learn that a No is a NO when it comes to play with Genetics.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Those wacky kids. Once they become gods whatta gonna do?
Looks like nana's got to put the smack down family style.

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Review By [Mcspender] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 13" from Mcspender
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So what happened in the Preds vs Aliens verse is affecting this timeline?. Interesting, any chance for a cameo by the yaujta with a country's name?. Cool chapter, see ya!
Comments from author:
Yep, it's a three way. Buffy AVP: Messiah got me thinking about the impact of Humans who are part Old Ones. It would be interesting how the Bene Tleilax and the Gesserit deal with somthing more than human. Sorry pal, Dora the explorer won't be able to make it but I do guarantee an old friend will be showing up.

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Review By [Mcspender] • Date [5 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 12" from Mcspender
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So Trinity killed 15 more slayers before being subdued?. It is gonna be hard as hell to stop her from accidentaly walking into a vat of molten iron or drinking some bleach :o. Cool chapter, see ya!!!
Comments from author:
Nah, not Trinity, she's harmless. The one that Buffy reviewed earlier did all the damage. You can't keep monsters in a box. They will always escape. Trinity's in her room playing with her Slayers of Dune action figures. : )

Up next, deep background and a major WTF?

See Ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [3 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 11" from Mcspender
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So, as usual, the witches are dying to to solve a riddle wrapped in a mystery inside an enigma. They're kinda silly like that, and I really wanna see when the truth blows ups in the collective faces xD!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Thanks pal!
I think a wise man once said "That with great power comes great insanity." So true.


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Review By [Mcspender] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 6" from wookiewizard
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Its a brave author who tries to crossover anything with Dune and because of that i was willing to give this story a fair chance and see how it progressed because i knew it would be a difficult task to pull off, but then you went and added elements of McDune and as an orthodox Herbertarian i can no longer give this fic anything like a fair chance.

I wish you luck with your writing and i still think its a brave choice i just think you chose the wrong Dune.
Comments from author:
The thing is, this is built over a pile of nine stories that came before. So, there's a whole body of work that this stems from. I think I can pull this off. The hard part is integrating elements of the supernatural with the Duneverse secular humanism. Remember both Leto and Paul Muad'dib used the threat of the supernatural to rule. Heck, Leto tried to pass himself off as a god.

Take a look at http://www.tthfanfic.org/Series-1802
and http://www.tthfanfic.org/Series-2109
and http://www.tthfanfic.org/Series-2109

See Ya!
Review By [wookiewizard] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 10" from Mcspender
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Willow???. Weeell, nothing like an old friend, a friend with some abandonment issues and a little Antisocial personality disorder tendencies in the mix, to liven things up. Ohh yeah!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
When people go opening up portals to other universes the question is which Willow?
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Review By [Mcspender] • Date [24 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 9" from Mcspender
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“Get some rest.” Buffy said as she stood to leave. “We’ll be making a trip soon. “ Buffy left the room. Basilah had won a small victory.
Suree, Basilah you had a tiny victory, and the prize for that victory is... to be killed after you stop being useful to Buffy.
Cool chater, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
I'm sure Buffy is not that bloodthirsty. : ) But she has gone a little "Zero Dark Thirty."
Besides, the BG always have an ace or two up their sleeve.

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Review By [Mcspender] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from Mcspender
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Now that she has a name, Trinity can make her own choices. I hope her free will can make the right choice for her, and not the seed that gave her that... state of being.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Now Buffy has a brat kid with superpowers. Gee, I wonder if she has ever experienced that before?

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Review By [Mcspender] • Date [16 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 7" from Mcspender
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Wut?. The Dog, the Goat and the Venison are just like the Daleks: the cockroaches of the Universe xD!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Hey, there's a WRH branch in every universe of the the multiverse. So yeah, they're like cockroaches.
Thank goodness a Predator wiped out the Senior Partners. : )

See Ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [15 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 7" from bradsan
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oh damn W&H and we know where that's going. I hope Buffy finds a way like she always did to clean this mess.

Good job.
Comments from author:
Thanks! There is definitely something going on just under the surface. Things are not quite what they appear to be.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [14 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 6" from SpacedCadet
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“I’m past done. I’m brunt

Did you mean "burnt"?
Comments from author:
Fixed it. Thanks! : )
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 6" from Mcspender
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To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
"Auguries of Innocence"William Blake.
Nice insight of what happened in Buffy's mind during her exile. And boy, it was kinda surprising taking the offer of those Benne Geseritt, but weell, ya gotta get all the help you can.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Yep, I figured Buffy needed a break after the events of "The End of Days." After a hundred years on a backwater planet no one escapes the machinations of the Bene Gesserit. Besides, she's not speaking to the Fish Speakers much these days.

I just saw "Beasts of the Southern Wild" man, the character "Hushpuppy" reminds me so much of Sineya from "The Dreams of the Lost" Go see it if you can.

Next up more violence!

See Ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 5" from Mcspender
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Have you seen the movie "The Last Lovecraft: Relic of Cthulhu" http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Last_Lovecraft:_Relic_of_Cthulhu ??. It tells the story about the last living relative of HP Lovecraft, and it's waay funny. Without giving ya a lot of spoilers, the Lovecrafts in this movie are immune to the powers of the Oldies Ones.
I mean, if she's gonna fight those guys and their spawn, she's gotta get aall the help she can get :S.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Everybody loves old squid head. I wonder if the Destroyer ever reads Lovecraft. He must think it funny or romantic. I may check it out as soon as I find the bootleg.
Yeah, it's gonna get rough for Buffy from now on. But I have a great deal of faith in little miss "I am the law."

Next chapter soon!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 4" from Mcspender
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Ah, Eugenuics, the never ending tool of the Benne Gesserit A.K.A. Control freaks :P.
It's time to kick some butts!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
It's not just breeding Humans this time. The B.G. have big plans.

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Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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