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Review of chapter "Prologue" from TheLandYacht
Excellent story. I particularly like how Willow is forced to come to terms with her level of responsibility.

I would expect Kinsey to cause a stink at some point in the next story, not only for the members of SG1, but for the continuing partnership between the US Government and the Sunnydale group.

I, too, am looking forward to another look at the JAG group, hopefully with a bit of NCIS tossed in as well.
Review By [TheLandYacht] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from Harry
Very nicely done! Now, how about that sequel you hinted at? I KNOW we've been busy with Ragnarok, but STILL! A sequel is a MUST! The ending SCREAMS for one! Especially with Kinsey mucking up the works again. How about feeding him to a Vampire, or, better yet, GLORY!
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Only Ship in the Quadrant" from Harry
Well, except for that escape craft, the Gou'ald have been defeated. And that means a celebration. *Starts singing Celebration by Kool and the Gang* But, something tells me that we have NOT seen the last of the System Lords. All this has done is give them something to think about. And they WILL be back!
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Isn't This The ENTERPRISE's Job?" from Harry
*PULLS DRAGON DAGGER AND PLAYS SUMMONING NOTES* This is DEFINITELY a DEFCON 1 situation! Even with the aid of SGC, Air Force pilots, and the people who chose to stay on, things are starting to hit the fan. Time to get ready for a fight. A BIG fight for the U E S Prometheus. Now, prepare for battle, depending on what the reports say.
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dusting the Annoying Bite of Reality" from Harry
Well, things have gone well. Red has been accepted as the Ship's Captain, and she is pulling together a crew with a mixture of kids, her fellow Scoobies, some adults, and holograms. But this news from SGC is going to call for a meeting of the command staff. This situation is going to call for a command decision and its one that Willow will need advice before she decides how to react to the news.
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Holodeck Program Buffy 1 0 - 3 1 - 1 9 9 7" from Harry
So, Giles learned some Vulcan techniques in this AU to control the Ripper. But, this time, the Ripper came into play in a way that worked out well. But, one of those who got changed was Jenny Calendar! This is going to be INTERESTING!
Comments from author:
Wait until you hit 'Isn't This The ENTERPRISE's Job?' ;)
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Harry
Why do I see some NCIS with all the smacking on the back of the head that Xander is getting? But, I like the idea of SG1, Star Trek, and Buffy woven into one story. I just wish we could get a image of Willow in Fleet uniform to top this off.
Comments from author:
*drool* uh... oops :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from Barona
Very well done story, and the best "Ship of the Line" one I have seen. Love the fact Willow got to be the Commanding Officer!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Of course I do point out that Ship of the Line was a secondary challenge in the writing of this story. :) After-all, Willow's the Captain... not Xander =D
Review By [Barona] • Date [4 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from HappyWonKinobi
I loved this! I can't wait for the sequel to come out! :)
Review By [HappyWonKinobi] • Date [24 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from Darkstrider
I love this story. Well crafted, nice characterization and above all...STAR TREK! Yeah!
Comments from author:
Thank you...

If I ever manage to get past the lethargy of 'writer burn out' I fully intend to write additional episodes of this. =D
Review By [Darkstrider] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from myrddyn
yeah i know it requires a level of tech support that doesn't exist YET, but it wouldn't be too hard to use the holo decks and maybe some of those vr suites or even getting the memory device from that asgard protected planet early and transfere the knowledge (or maybe have giles give a similar spell to ethans a try?) (sorry if i can't seem to get my idea into words properly) i never liked that the sgc built all their ships and yards on planet even their mines were all groundside which to be perfectly honest for a space faring civilisation is really bad. i always thought that everytime the daedalus went on a trip to pegasus that on the way home they should have made a pass by that
planet from 100 days (hanka?) and beamed as much pure naquadah from the asteroids as they could carry to be dropped of at a refinary on earth. hell the fact they didn't have dedicated
cargo ships was a huge mistake then they were complaining that they could only manufacture
half a dozen vessels for the whole year sometime duing universe! its a major logistics nightmare.
besides thats what holograms are good for they can copy their engineering holograms and build
a shipyard that mans itself all automatic hehehe! and i'm only suggesting a few star wars
bits of tech star trek was great but a big problem that they'd have with their ships verses gou'ld and other races is point defence against smaller craft like fighters. i wonder if giles could use a variation on the halloween spell and a manaquin to create a commander data? as he was seconds before the end of nemesis?
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [16 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from myrddyn
o.k very cool story so far! and excellent work with the pilotable torpedoes ( i always hated that
star trek didn't have any dedicated carrier ships for fighter combat, it takes all that humanity has learned about war and throws it out the window! a carrier is a force multiplier and its what has helped the us be one of the top world powers for so long!) once the ship is finished being complete it'd be a good idea if they started work on making utopia plantia drive yards or spacedock 1. maybe have jonothan add some star wars tech like the quad blaster cannons from the empires ships, and lets not forget they still have the ship thats powered down that they detected!
so please hurry up and update looking forward to what you come up with :)
Comments from author:

I've had a bit of a dry spell on the writing the last couple months. I'm hoping to get /something/ written again soonish, whether it be a start on the sequel to this or a follow-on chapter to one of my other works...

I very much doubt I'd do 'Utopia Planitia Yards' as that implies a level of technical support that does not yet exist in the Stargate Universe. On the other hand, there's that nice 'hidden facility' in the Nevada desert... ya know, where they built the X-303... ;) (Of course, that facility is so massive that it surely already exists, since it would take at least a couple years to build the X-303 from scratch).

As to Star Wars tech... maybe. It really depends on what Jono remembers, after all, with the PROMETHEUS, they have the entire Starfleet Database. With Jono, it's all in his head.
Review By [myrddyn] • Date [16 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from AlbertG
First of all, thank you for writing this story. I am hoping that you will continue this. Although I like 'Code Ragnarok' hat one has 225 chapters so far and I would love to see a continuation of this story. With respect please continue soon. It's rare to have a good Buffy-Star trek crossover. Thank you once more.
Review By [AlbertG] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Okay. I don't know how I missed this when it was posted. Its excellent. You even managed to work in DAWN. (Poor Joyce hearing it like that) The girl needs a mobile emitter to get hugged, though. I really hope that there will be a sequel soon.

So many loose ends to resolve, least of all with the JAG angle. Wonder what Kinsey will try against the Prometheus crew? And how the Council will react to SLAYER IN SPACE! (With special guest star: Mr Gordo the pig!)

Thanks for writing

Edit: Heh. Glad to be of assistance. Wonder what Willow will get from her home. (And what her parents will think of it all...)
Comments from author:
Actually, the PROMETHEUS is fully 'holocapable'... DAWN S just can't leave the ship.

And thanks! I do hope to get a second 'episode' written before the end of the year. And oooo! I think you just tossed me the teaser! =D

1630 Revello Drive. The sudden absence of evening noises, crickets and other insects mostly, was rudely interrupted by a high pitched whine and a flash of light from an upstairs window. This was immediately followed by a crashing noise from that same location.

"Dammit Andrew!" Buffy muttered as she picked herself up off the floor. "Beaming me in standing on the EDGE of my bed MUST have been intentional."
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Do We Go From Here?" from valdimarian
Ack, sorry, I get so into one facet of things that it ends up occupying my whole review >.<

I loved the story, you perfectly balanced Teen Willow and Captain Willow in a way that I could totally understand. The one concern I have is how little the main cast and crew seemed to appear, but for an introductory episode you do have to do a lot more explaining than in later episodes, so hopefully that will even out.

Slowing down the pacing of the story should help with that, it seems like you reduced a 3 part crossover episode between Buffy, Star Trek, and Stargate into one two part crossover with elements of Buffy thrown in.
Comments from author:
No problem!

As to the 'Buffyverse' aspects, this story was focused on the fallout of the Halloween costume choices with an immediate crisis thrown in.

I do have plans for follow-on stories which will have a somewhat more Sunnydale focused bent. Buffy does still have to patrol... though Johno did get her a nice new sword ;)
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [8 Aug 13] • Not Rated
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