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Review of chapter "Family Ties" from etraytin
Review:
It's nice that Sarah will take a stand on something she believes in, but it does seem weird that John is so paranoid about Buffy. She did pretty much bend over backwards to help him, and revealed secrets that put a lot more people on the line than Batman and one houseful of kids. She's taking it gracefully, but it still seems like a slap in the face. Now I have to see what happens next!
Comments from author:
Well, John *is* Batman, who is notorious for being paranoid even when it seems unreasonable. Also, Buffy has an army-sized support network. John's is himself and Sarah. When I wrote this, though, I think I mostly had Batman's epic paranoia in mind.

"Now I have to see what happens next!"
Hope you enjoy the rest of the series!
Review By [etraytin] • Date [21 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Ties" from ShyBob
Review:
"No one likes a surprise visit from big sis." Nice Xander line, and again with the first-rate Buffy quip-age throughout. Neat to see the John & Sarah solidarity thing going on, over and above the Slayer-solidarity thing.
Comments from author:
I've read this over quite a few times and each time I'm not sure it works, so I'm glad to hear you say so :)
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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