Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from cloudleonsgurl
Great beginning. Love it.
Review By [cloudleonsgurl
] • Date [5 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from shakeval
Andrew needs something simple, something that requires time, something that doesn't start off as an uber-hax ultimate killing machine. he needs something that may be a missunderstood pokemon, maybe rarely used or something that starts weak be eventually is something special. . . doesn't have to be a standard starter, although that could work, maybe a charmander.
Review By [shakeval
] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from stardrow
i don't know what would fit andrew...
Review By [stardrow
] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Not Rated