Review of chapter "Bonding" from
GideonReview:
So one or more of them were dreaming right, because that all makes the kind of sense that doesn't! Or maybe they are on an acid trip or something :)
Comments from author:
No, not really. This is my attempt at writing a humorous story, actually. Sorry if it doesn't make much sense...I tried.
Review By [
Gideon] • Date [18 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bonding" from
KatrinaReview:
And, of course, their lives are just full of the weird. Also, always thought the plotline of Magic leaves the world was ... well, not well thought out.
I kind of like that you're poking small holes... :)
Thank you for sharing this.
Comments from author:
You're welcome. Thanks for the review!
Review By [
Katrina] • Date [15 Jan 13] • Not Rated