interesting idea, pretty good story line and good character development. had some trouble following along at some part cause it seemed rushed and it might have been better to slow down a little. all in all not a bad read. I'll be checking out any other stories you've written.
Review By [Skyefather] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Great read The only bit I would think to change is to have Minerva have Albus show his arm or maybe she show her arm and then tell him to show his arm before checking the students. And that is a minor change in a great read Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [25 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great story, and the end of the "dork lord"!(dumbledore), love it. keep up the good work. ----- Opinions are like assholes. Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.
Review By [APS] • Date [17 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
As a way of thanking you, if you want to see the next chapter of any particular one of my current fics, please let me know which one it is, and it'll go the head of the list. ;-)
Next, I LMAO when i read "...Putting those two together with the Xanders disturbing love of explosives had been a stroke of genius on Tonks part...."!!!
Since he's now being referred to a singular level of being or principle ('the Xander'), the Founding Scooby has obviously achieved a level of fame and/or notoriety greater than any other member of the Scooby Gang. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [7 Feb 13] • Not Rated
And Harry fulfills the prophecy. The Dark Lord is dead by Harry's hand. Of course, the prophecy doesn't name the Dark Lord, and given the damage Dumbledore has done, it's probable that the prophecy was never about Voldemort at all...
Review By [Difdi] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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